| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh man i wish i could write like uuuu!! *sniff/cry* the part when *sniff/cry* kagome was gonna die *sniff/cry* was SO SAD!!! It was the first fanfiction that has ever made me cry! Your such a good writer!! Your my role model!!! I LOVE your story it's REALLLY GREEEAAAT!!! please PLEASE update!! Oh and even though kilala is how u say it it's really spelled kirara. It's weird, but just a tip! Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic hope u up-date soon
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Reviewed By: Esther On: October 18, 2003 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are simply the Best!!!! Your stories just keep updating & I love it. No hair-pulling frustration of waiting for the next update. I simply love your story that's why. Love waffy Inuyasha & Kagome scenes. Sango & Miroku are great too. What can I say? I can't get enough of your story. Please update as usual. Looking forward to the next chapter (yeah !!!!)
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: October 17, 2003 20:59 CDT
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Yes!! They're going to the castle, lol, though I'm sure you already had that planned out beforehand anyway. I'm glad to hear that this is going to be a long fic, give us more to enjoy! Oh, and stop being so modest ;) this is a great fic, that's why we are reading and reviewing it. Hmmm that just made us sound like some sort of elite critics didn't it, lol, but you do have fans, and we think you are doing a great job, so take a moment and bask in it, k. Thanks for the new chapter, loved it. Keep up the wonderful writing, update when you can and good luck on the tests. Best Wishes
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: October 17, 2003 19:25 CDT
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You hope this will be a great fic, you hope? Be a little more positive, this IS a GREAT fic, and nobody better tell you differently. Really good!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe On: October 17, 2003 18:24 CDT
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long stories r good! ~angelbabe17...im not signed in
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Reviewed By: inuyashasdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story up-date soon
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 11:50 CDT
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Just a little announcement...if you see my name coming up frequently on the reviews list...I found out that that is pretty much the only way that I can check my reviews...unless anyone else here knows how!
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Reviewed By: Karla On: October 14, 2003 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time that I have reviewed a fic on this site. So if I got the ratings wrong then please forgive me. I really enjoyed this fic and I would like to know the out come of it. Kagome and Inuyasha would be a force to be reconned with should they rule the Western Lands together. I understand why he wouldn't want to go 'home' again, but with Kagome by his side things should be a lot better. Well enough for now.
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 21:53 CDT
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Reviewed By: great On: October 13, 2003 18:01 CDT
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great story con't
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: October 13, 2003 09:45 CDT
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Myouga, got treated, like, a little, child. Who saw the humor in that? Really, really good. Now they both don't think they love each other! They are both so dense. Really good! Love it!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 08:04 CDT
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hmmmm.... what to say...... I LOVE THIS FIC!!!! WHO CARES IF THERE'S A LOT OF INFO? INFO IS GOOD!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 07:18 CDT
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hey sometimes u can just throw a chapter in there that is just a filler chap. it doesnt matter! its ur story rite? anyway i did like this chapter but kagome needs to be getting some rest! she just rose from the dead lol
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: October 13, 2003 07:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter, I don't understand why you were so apologetic about it, is it because there wasn't a lot of action but talking/info instead? A good story isn't all about action, it does have to have plot and substance, and the past two chapter had that even if there wasn't something exactly happening physically for the characters, there was on a emotional/mental level. As you said there was information that us as readers needed before you could go on, and I could see several things that you put in there that you might be using later on, so don't say you're sorry ;) You did a great job getting that info across without making one yawn and think "come on already", lol, wasn't boring at all. So...thanks for the new chapter, I enjoyed it, and am looking forward to reading the next! Best Wishes
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