Title: piccolo
Reviewed By: __echo_ On: April 15, 2004 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love piccolo and their are so few fun lemons or anything at all about him! i just got done writning one about him and Bulma! please keep writng Piccolo, he is the best and this story is just so much fun!!! i sugest letting her sneack back one day or have him go look for her and be now...properly endowed? that would be just wonderful!! love it!
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