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| "Twilight Youji" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Koneko Neko On: August 13, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOH! This is GOOD! It's original, and has a flare of sorrow (or maybe I'm imagining it?) that just keeps me wanting more! You've got me, hook, line, and sinker! | Reviewed By: Switch On: August 12, 2003 12:31 CDT
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Your prologue and the first chapter are the same..... | Reviewed By: evil Jy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit I was a bit sceptic about this one at the beginning but now it's a really interesting story. So please keep writing. Tho I think you should be careful that it doesn't get to confusing and to hard to follow (who is who/what, who wants what, etc). |
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