"Joey's Anime Gang" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle On: January 10, 2004 13:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review: There were a few grammatical errors- nothing more than a few misplaced capital letters... The story was innacurate. Yugi is the same age as the others if I'm not mistaken; he's 15 or 16. Other than that this fic is off to a good start. It sounds like one of my ideas!
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Title: Hi Yami Hamtaro! Reviewed By: Yami Bijou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 18:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hamha Yami Hamtaro! It's good so far, but why does it have to be R? |
Reviewed By: power of renamon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2003 07:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like it so far keep up the good work |