| "When you Lie Next to Me" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i liked you're story. Have to admit that I've never seen a story written from that point of view but it was very good. Great job
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 12:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kurama is such a perfectionist that I think most of us can see him getting "tunnel vision" trying to get his work done and putting everything else on hold. Good story. As far as Hiei crying? Yeah... once the fox had broken through, I can see him crying with/around/for Kurama. Not many others, but ... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Athena aka hiei_fireyoukia On: September 25, 2003 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Deep down - deep down - dah-dee-dah-dah. Oh, sorry, any way, I loved it I loved it and I loved it. Very nice, I want you to write more stories, please!!! For Me? Bye, Athena aka hiei_fireyoukia
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Reviewed By: Athena aka hiei_fireyoukia On: September 25, 2003 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Deep down - deep down - dah-dee-dah-dah. Oh, sorry, any way, I loved it I loved it and I loved it. Very nice, I want you to write more stories, please!!! For Me? Bye, Athena aka hiei_fireyoukiaF
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Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 14:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was good, but WAY too much crying, i know kurama would cry, but hiei wouldn't cry much or would he? |
