| "Sudden Urges" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Sudden Urges
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...sorry for the rather low ratings. I did like the fic just not as much as other fics I've read. I just hope that your writing has gotten better over time. As I was telling my friends earlier, "Some authors do have all the lemons, but some just don't seem to make the lemonade." The more details, the more originality, the better. Well...g2g lol. ^-^ Tchao!!
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: SBOD On: June 03, 2005 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was kewl. I believe in the whole Hiei's a virgin thing, but I think you made him a bit too innocent. He did, after all, live in the Makai for like, two hundred years. Still, the sex was hot and Kura was funny. good job!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 03:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
For a second lemon this was really quite good. However, you need a new paragraph every time someone speaks...
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG this is a great story i love it it's soooo kawaii ok well Ja ne. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: Yami Aya On: July 01, 2004 19:34 CDT
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Well, your writing itself I think is quite good, but the story could have used some papragraphs... dunno if you wrote it like that or if the formatting got buggered up when you uploaded.
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Reviewed By: deaths angel On: February 14, 2004 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done says me but kurama in MINE so to all of the hiei girl find but Kurama in beter and that was Graet fic I give you cholate.
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Reviewed By: Savara On: October 18, 2003 07:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this and to clear this up Hiei is MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If anyone disagrees, ha ha ha too bad!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 12:15 CDT
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Have to agree with the other reviewers ... good lemon and a cute story ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kotala On: September 19, 2003 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! That was so cute. Especially the end. I loved it. Keep up the awsome work. |
Reviewed By: Immrotal_hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 12:52 CDT
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wow this is really good keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Kurama-no-Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2003 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done, now I have someone to look up to for Yaoi lemons, LOL. I'm not very good at them mind you lol. I;m not really into the hiei/kurama thing but I am opened-minded! Well Kind of.. Hiei's mine though... MWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA |
Reviewed By: PixieStick On: August 12, 2003 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! it was wow!.....daaaaamn! that was some hot sh*t XD i liked it! very descriptive! ^_~ i love HxK lemons!! especially if theyre as cute as this one was!! ^_^ |
