| "When then boys are away" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: just a review
Reviewed By: D.D.S On: March 28, 2004 16:40 CST
Comment/Review:
good story better than some of the really short ones u have
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Reviewed By: Kanjii On: December 20, 2003 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, dealing with Inuyasha vs. Ranma, inuyasha in his human form would make a good fight with ranma. but in his normal form, i dont think ranma can win. but inuyash in his demon form vs. ranma in his Cat-fu stance is anyone's fight!
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Reviewed By: megh On: September 20, 2003 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is officially my favorite crossover between Ranma and InuYasha. It's in character and in style (how else to call it?) for both series. Not to mention there is a good plot, and it is readable :P
quick note - if you do try to affiance Ranma and Kagome, all hell would break loose. That would be amusing... :D |
Reviewed By: Nova19 On: September 19, 2003 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Christian magic??? Japanese people are mostly buddhist. So Kasumi having a cross is stupid and Akane using it with an arrow to defeat a mecha is even more dumb. |
Reviewed By: Crystal Singer On: August 30, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, as usual. I liked the way you got the message down the well. Also thought the plot was very feasible. Your stories are always well thought out. I wish they all were. |
