Reviewed By: KittyKristi On: March 24, 2004 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeey, pretty good! I didn't think Aya was perfectly in character, but he was fine in the end. I disliked just two things: 1. Aya didn't ever take the matter up with Youji, 2.You mentioned Ken reeally liking sex with Youji, but then it didn't matter. Maybe it would have made it *slightly* more interesting if he had that problem of picking one of them. Ehh.. well I'm tired right now or this would be a better review. In any case, other then those things it's a really good fic.
|
