| "Broken Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 10:42 CDT
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Update! please one chappie left and you havn't written in ages. I'm dying to find out what happens!
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Reviewed By: Ken's Girl On: September 25, 2004 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your SoR, S&G,and O/C, was great! Your fanfic was sooooo not boring. On some of the more epic sceens you actually had me crying for poor little Ryu ;_;. But I think you had Ryu forgive Bakura too easyly even if he is in love. I would have given it alot more thought. But to be honest it was really cool and im adding it to my fav list!^____^
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooo this is sooo cool!!! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 14:07 CDT
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ahhh Kail and Bakura kicked serious Marik ass...woo go them...oh my god i can't wait to see how these people pick up their lives after what they went through.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 24, 2004 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good! So Kura wasn't faking after all... What will happen to Ryou now? Ditto with Malik...I'm getting fed up with finding all those Bakura abuses Ryou fanfics! i know it's a popular trend, but my muses aren't too happy about those fanfics! *points to Bakura wielding daggers and fuming* Bakura: How dare they! I wouldn't hurt my hikari! Ryou: *sighs* Why me?! Why do I always get tortured?!
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Reviewed By: Neko_Katakura On: August 06, 2004 00:42 CDT
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this such a good ficcy! I luv! (if my mommy found out i'm reading these kind of things, she'll kill me) so your lucky i was able to read this while she was gone! I've been wanting to read this for a long time, but i had to wait until my mom wasn't home...heh...and it was worth the wait! This is such a good fic and i can't wait 'til you update! ^___^ good job! ^^
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 15:50 CDT
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please update i can't believe it poor poor Ryou and i pray to god that Bakura isn't jyust joking around!!!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 15:50 CDT
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please update i can't believe it poor poor Ryou and i pray to god that Bakura isn't jyust joking around!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: July 29, 2004 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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*scoffs* Change of Heart? I'ld say it's a little too late for that? Cuz Ryou lost his voice and more.. And if I was him, I wouldn't forgive Bakura so easily. Gomen if I sound cynicial, but I HATE abuse stories, cuz 2 of my friends suffered from child abuse and worse... Pls have things get better for Ryou! And Bakura better not be faking! Or he is going to pay!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 15:21 CDT
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O_O Holy Ra... what on earth have u done?! I mean, I liked the chapter and all, but poor Kairi!! Poor Malik!! And what's up w/ Bakura?! Aw, ur evil, u made another cliffie!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Necrofear On: June 18, 2004 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon i can't wait to see bakura's reaction. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT ARE YOU DOING LEAVING IT THERE??? NO!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!! I love this fic so much...
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Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 09:16 CST
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EEEEEEEEEEEE!!! MOREMOREMOREMORE!!!! I can't WAIT to see Bakura's reaction... XD This fic is EVIL and I LOVE IT! I wanna see more of Kail- I wonder what he'll do!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 21:21 CST
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O.O Wow, even though u haven't gotten to raping Ryou yet, I'm still very amazed and horrified. I'm not sure if that's a good sign or not, but still, pretty good chapter. If Ryou's gonna be punished for confessing love, then please, not too much blood. Well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: *koumori wolf* On: March 27, 2004 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o-o oh...my...god...this is the BEST fanfic I have EVER read!!!! please please please PLEASE update as soon as possible!!! I'm dying to know what happens!!
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