| "Broken Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl who is too lazy to log in On: February 25, 2004 21:53 CST
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Ryou is mine, he doesn't deserve this! But other than that this is a real good fic!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 16:43 CST
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Rape? Really? *comforts Malik and Ryou* Just don't include too much screaming or blood, that's what ruins a good story like this. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lady Speed Stick On: February 06, 2004 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a great story. Every time I get on the internet i look and see if you've updated. PLEASE DONT KEEP ME WAITING!!! ^o^ (cry)
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Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 22:15 CST
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AAAAAH!!! *bouncing off the walls* You have SO got to keep writing this, it's GREAT!!! ^_____________________^
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 17:37 CST
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O_O Holy- OMG HOW COULD U DO THAT TO KAIRI?!?! And the body in the wardrobe thing...urgh. *coughs* Poor Malik-chan, and Ryou-chan too. Please don't die on me, Malik!! *coughs again* Ok, anyway, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 15:56 CST
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Broken Wings Broken Wings Broken Wings!!!!! *coughs* Get my point?
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 16:49 CST
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*sniffles* Poor Malik-chan. I hope that Bakura-chan or Kairi gets there and helps him out REALLY soon. Anyway, update soon!
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Title: ahhhh 15 times!!!
Reviewed By: Bokana Mitsune On: December 03, 2003 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH IVE READ THIS FIC 15 TIMES PLEASE UPDATE IT I WANNA READ MOOOOOOORE ITS SO AWSOM!!!! *gose back and reads a 16th time* PLEASE!?!?! ~+~Bokana~+~
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Title: WHOOHOO!
Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ROCK! I LOVE THIS FIC! I adore Kail and Kairi, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! You'd better write another one soon! ^______^ This story is DEFINITELY on my favorites! :D
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 19:21 CST
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Bad Baku-chan, stop hurting Ryou-chan already and kiss him for Ra's sake!! ^^;; Heh, sorry about that. Anyway, very good chapter. But poor Malik-chan! Please tell me Baku-chan will inject the cure soon. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 16:57 CDT
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*blinks* Interesting lemon...anyway, I'm Angel Reaper at FF.Net, I think I might of reviewed this story there. Anyway, pretty good chapter. And Marik is pretty seductive and hot...*smirks* Update soon!
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 23:22 CDT
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YAY!!!!!!!! MORE MORE this is really goodi like it T_T poor poor ryou he is always tortured......... poor bakura too... i have no idea why i aid that but owell keep the chappies acomin i like!!!!!
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 00:17 CDT
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NICE ending |
Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 21:55 CDT
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It's a nice story so far, leaving out that Ryou is getting hurt. But, is this going to end with Bakura changing and being nice... or is Ryou gonna leave is what I'm curious about. I doubt you'll tell me, but if you decide to, my e-mail right now is Pixi_punk_@hotmail.com. Keep going |
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2003 21:12 CDT
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Hey I'm writing a story similar to this except there aint no Angel in it...Hope ya don't mind if I post mind up once it's finished. Nice plotline, Bakura rocks!! |
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