| "Transcending Memories: A Bond Unsealed" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: umm
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 19:09 CST
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It seems like an interesting story but every time I come to see what happens next because it says its updated it feels like nothing was added. Sorry if this seems rude in any way. -.-'
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Reviewed By: t recorder On: May 15, 2006 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so goooooooooood plz up date sooooon i love it t recorder
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Reviewed By: queen of magicians [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 16:32 CST
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Reviewed By: queen of magicians [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 16:32 CST
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oh my gosh ...... coool.... i hope you havn't stopped this fic. .its really good!!!!!! keep it going@!@@@!!!!!
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Title: Holy moly!
Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome fic! I loved your paintings so much that I finally decided to check out the story, unable to keep back my curiosity! This is really great! Just one question, why do you italize some of the words, I can see if you're trying to annunciate something or make something seem more important, but you do it all the time. Anyways, I really like this story! You have such style with this. I like this I can't wait to read more. You do have a lot of depth with this and that's what makes this so appealing to me!
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Reviewed By: violet eyes rika On: November 01, 2004 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only read up to ch.8 but I'll read and review later. Anyway, I would like to say that you have an excellent plot and have a good, how can I say it, phrasing of words around the dialoge. It's not like most other fics which have. Anzu: Hi It inspires me to be more detailed around the speaking parts. Even if I'm not like above but you've shown me I have a long way to go. Even if your story is really good I still have some suggstions that you can do to make some parts of the story, the real meaningful parts, make a more impact on the reader. Like not over using italics. I don't know if you are still over using them in later ch. but right now it's getting over used and boring. Second is over use of !. SAme thing if you use them to often the ! becomes less important and turns off the reader what you are saying. Lastly, you also over use ... when Yami is thinking to himself. As a writer you need to come up with a creative way to put it there without the reader getting annoyed by it. Like I said above that your story is really urging me to write again for my negleted fanfics. Not on this site of course but on another. Well I'll be reviewing later and say what else you can do to make this better. Violet Eyes Rika
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Reviewed By: Nefertiti [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 05:34 CST
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Very good story. There's really nothing bad you can say about it. It is extremely good. Please continue soon.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: August 29, 2004 13:08 CDT
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Hey! Finally my stupid computer will let me get on this great fic of yours. Here ta give you some motivation! I don't know why people aren't reviewing for this. You have +1000 visits and only 16 reviews! (including this one) Now that can't be right! I love the fic and don't you give up! I'm now gonna reread this fic after a long time from trying to find this. *mutters* Stupid computer. *normal tone* Well I'm gonna read it now and I hope you'll get the next chappie soon. Catcha later!
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Title: Great work
Reviewed By: Rianith (Author: Stilwater) On: July 20, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great. Only one thing wrong. You said you did Historical research on Egypt. I think you overlooked something though. Egyptians believed that Facial hair was 'unsanitary'. The beards we see on murals and sarcoughigi are part of the headdress, not their real facial hair. ;) just a little tid bit I thought might help.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: July 17, 2004 14:04 CDT
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Please update soon. It's a great fic. I really wanna know what happens next. Hope you're still out there. Please you have to write more. I like reading this fic. Well awesome fic and I wanna read more. Catcha later. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 26, 2004 08:56 CDT
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I really hope you're gonna update soon. I really like this fanfic. Can't wait for the rest. I'm still here and I'm still waiting for the next chapter. This fanfic of yours is great and I hope you'll continue. Catcha later. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 22, 2004 09:08 CDT
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Hey it's been a long time. When are ya gonna update? I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this story. I love it! Teana and Yami would make a great couple. I don't know why people hate Teana so much and want her to be tortured and stuff and I don't think I wanna find out. Teana doesn't deserve to be tortured, insulted by or anything like that. Teana's great! I wish I could be able to meet her someday. Well update soon, k? I really like it, lots.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 09, 2004 11:36 CDT
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Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry!!!!! I couldn't get on the net for weeks because of the stupid telephone line. You can kill me if ya want, but after when I finish reading the story. Heh! Heh! Well thank you, thank you, thank you for putting up the next chappie. I encourage you to go on with is story. It's great and I wanna keep reading this story and find out what happens next. This story has VERY tense situations. (don't take it as a distaste) Another thing is that when the authoress describes Prince Yami it makes me blush and start to daydream. *Blushing* Well thanks again for putting up the next chappie!
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Arakayama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 19:33 CDT
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That was a GOOD chapter. Keep it up. ^^
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Araka On: May 22, 2004 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! No pressure or anything but I would hope you post the next one soon. It's a good fic with yami in it. I love him. ^^
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