| "Transcending Memories: A Bond Unsealed" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Great work
Reviewed By: Rianith (Author: Stilwater) On: July 20, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great. Only one thing wrong. You said you did Historical research on Egypt. I think you overlooked something though. Egyptians believed that Facial hair was 'unsanitary'. The beards we see on murals and sarcoughigi are part of the headdress, not their real facial hair. ;) just a little tid bit I thought might help.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: July 17, 2004 14:04 CDT
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Please update soon. It's a great fic. I really wanna know what happens next. Hope you're still out there. Please you have to write more. I like reading this fic. Well awesome fic and I wanna read more. Catcha later. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 26, 2004 08:56 CDT
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I really hope you're gonna update soon. I really like this fanfic. Can't wait for the rest. I'm still here and I'm still waiting for the next chapter. This fanfic of yours is great and I hope you'll continue. Catcha later. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 22, 2004 09:08 CDT
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Hey it's been a long time. When are ya gonna update? I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this story. I love it! Teana and Yami would make a great couple. I don't know why people hate Teana so much and want her to be tortured and stuff and I don't think I wanna find out. Teana doesn't deserve to be tortured, insulted by or anything like that. Teana's great! I wish I could be able to meet her someday. Well update soon, k? I really like it, lots.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 09, 2004 11:36 CDT
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Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry!!!!! I couldn't get on the net for weeks because of the stupid telephone line. You can kill me if ya want, but after when I finish reading the story. Heh! Heh! Well thank you, thank you, thank you for putting up the next chappie. I encourage you to go on with is story. It's great and I wanna keep reading this story and find out what happens next. This story has VERY tense situations. (don't take it as a distaste) Another thing is that when the authoress describes Prince Yami it makes me blush and start to daydream. *Blushing* Well thanks again for putting up the next chappie!
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Arakayama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 19:33 CDT
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That was a GOOD chapter. Keep it up. ^^
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Araka On: May 22, 2004 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! No pressure or anything but I would hope you post the next one soon. It's a good fic with yami in it. I love him. ^^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 16, 2004 19:24 CDT
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Ohh please!!! How much time do you need until the next chappie will be up?! I'm really desperate!!
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 10, 2004 18:58 CDT
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Ohhh please keep going! It's sooo sweet, romantic, beautiful, romantically intense! People like this fanfic! I have no idea why some people hate Tea so much. And why don't Tea and Yami make a great pairing? I admire Tea very strongly. Ack! I'm talkin' Tea here! Of course this goes with Teana, too. Heh heh! Well please update with the next chappies finished. I'm glad some people feel the way I do about Teana and Yami. I hope this turns out to be a beautiful ending. And remember people are still out here to read this fanfic, and me too.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 06, 2004 18:28 CDT
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Ohhhh! I can't stop feeling soooooo sorry for Teana. ;_; She's just a sweet little girl. Her life seems so miserable. Hopefully her mother lightened up a bit and loved Teana back. I love this fanfic and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE have another chapter coming soon. I just can't stand the suspence and all the wonder of what would happen. I'm a big fan of romantic fanfics with happy endings. I love it how you let the adjectives seep in and give more explaination of what Yami and Teana felt towards each other. Your a great author and please keep writing this fanfic, it's worth reading. I'll betcha.
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Reviewed By: ennovy_tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 19:24 CST
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Wow! That was great! So where is Teana's father from? ~ennovy tenshi~
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Reviewed By: ennovy_tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 20:13 CST
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Wow! its SOOO beautiful! I'm glad other people around here like the Yami/Tea pairing. Me, i love it! Its hard to find around here with all the yaoi. oh yeah update soon! im adding this to favs!
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Reviewed By: Yami Lover On: November 20, 2003 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!!!!1 OHHHHHHHH!! BUT WHY WONT YOU DO ANYMORE ON IT? PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!?????
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Reviewed By: Ghaleons Secret Admirer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic so far is amazing. I've seen very little of the YGO series, but in this fiction it doesn't matter! Kathie has written them to be a very dramatic and real couple. It's very hot and intense between Yami and Teana! You can't help but reading until there is nothing left! The detail and among many other elements woven together make this story definitely the best YGO story I've ever read and it will be very hard to change my opinion I'm quite sure. Wonderful job Kat! I can't wait to read the rest! I know you can do it! ;)
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Reviewed By: cmp On: September 24, 2003 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story. I really like the coupling of Yami/Tea. I'm just glad that other people feel the way I do. I can't wait to read the rest of your story. It is a very good fanfic.
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