| "On the River's Bank" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: on the river's bank
Reviewed By: tomboy On: November 15, 2003 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
forgive my spelling for my review
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Title: on the river's bank
Reviewed By: tomboy On: November 15, 2003 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!I loved the part when Inuyasha says"let kouga come he had no claim,the most.Maybe you should do a sequel.something like [the gang walking along and kouga appears and tries to take kagome but she says something like I already am inuyasha so I can't be with you kouga.] finish it the way you want,in fact you don't even have to do it like I just said but it would be great to see the reaction on kouga's face when kagome tells him something like that.agian loved your fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 22:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
i must read all of ur fics over and over. ur a great author. |
Reviewed By: Inu's bitch On: August 31, 2003 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've very impressed. I've been reading a lot of Inuyasha fics lately. and this was the best lemon I've read in a while...I look forword to readin more of you work ;) *gets a nose bleed* |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are all your one shots this intense? I can't wait for a multi-chapter story from you. And I like how you slipped in that Koga line. Sneaky.
I put the ratings on this one. Sorry I forgot to do this on your other one.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are all your one shots this intense? I can't wait for a multi-chapter story from you. And I like how you slipped in that Koga line. Sneaky.
I put the ratings on this one. Sorry I forgot to do this on your other one.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
amazing...sexy n cute at the same time... |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
One fine lemon. |
Reviewed By: Anime-Angel On: August 21, 2003 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it very much...I wish that it wasn't just a one shot. It was good all the same. Although you did clear up somethings(koga)you didn't clear up things like do they love each other. What about kikyou and stuff. Other then that it was very very good. |
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