| "On the River's Bank" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: youkai chick supreme rides again
Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! a lemon! i loved it. ahhh inuyasha. naked...... wet........ damn, i must stop thinking about it! ooo, put it's o so tempting. good job.
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was too cute!! I loved this one as well!!
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Reviewed By: DemonKirara00 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 23:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Perfect. Beautiful writing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Abi On: October 12, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CHAPTER 2!,CHAPTER 2!
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Reviewed By: Utsukushi_dream On: October 08, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME FIC!! I love all your stories, they're amazing!!!!
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Reviewed By: WritingSecrets On: August 19, 2004 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its fluffy! Except on the dirty side...hehe...
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Title: ^O.O^
Reviewed By: DJ Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^O.O^ Yaaaaaayyyyy! I love it when Inu and Kags do... stuff. I just think they're the perfect couple and it's great when you find fics this well writen n' about their relationship n' stuff. Ying! Keep writing, I'll keep reading! - Ham is the Essance of Pajamas
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
near perfection
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very good but you didn't give much detail to the whole surounding situation. Like in your Halloween one there was more of a normal plot. And i'm not a big fan of the thought of them doing it dog style. Don't get me wrong you did a great job it's just not one of you best.
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Reviewed By: ?@me On: July 07, 2004 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Job I loved it a lot good lemmon keep writing a lot more of them
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good!!!!! i know i'm really late reading this story but it was good!!!!
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 21:19 CDT
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Love all your fics. Love all the one shots too! OMG! LOVE THEM ALL!
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Reviewed By: Simpfan06 On: April 11, 2004 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, all of your fics are wonderful! Kagome splashing out of the water reminds me of THe Little Mermaid after she turns human, yknow?? ANyways, you never disappoint.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 05:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it! So cute, I love how you had him work out that she was inviting him. Reading ihs thought process is always a treat, especially when he figures out something juicy! PS. cute ending too
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Title: *nodnods* I agree with the other reviewers!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I do agree with them! Most of the other one-shots that I've read of yours could become a mini story! they are soooo good too! ^^ Hopefully you may take your reviewers advise, because I'm sure that you could turn them into even better stories! *EVIL grins* whispers.... what if Kouga had stumbled upon them by accident? *wiggles eyebrows* Interesting!!!
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