| "On the River's Bank" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: ?@me On: July 07, 2004 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Job I loved it a lot good lemmon keep writing a lot more of them
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good!!!!! i know i'm really late reading this story but it was good!!!!
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 21:19 CDT
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Love all your fics. Love all the one shots too! OMG! LOVE THEM ALL!
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Reviewed By: Simpfan06 On: April 11, 2004 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, all of your fics are wonderful! Kagome splashing out of the water reminds me of THe Little Mermaid after she turns human, yknow?? ANyways, you never disappoint.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 05:26 CST
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I love it! So cute, I love how you had him work out that she was inviting him. Reading ihs thought process is always a treat, especially when he figures out something juicy! PS. cute ending too
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Title: *nodnods* I agree with the other reviewers!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I do agree with them! Most of the other one-shots that I've read of yours could become a mini story! they are soooo good too! ^^ Hopefully you may take your reviewers advise, because I'm sure that you could turn them into even better stories! *EVIL grins* whispers.... what if Kouga had stumbled upon them by accident? *wiggles eyebrows* Interesting!!!
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Title: on the river's bank
Reviewed By: tomboy On: November 15, 2003 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
forgive my spelling for my review
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Title: on the river's bank
Reviewed By: tomboy On: November 15, 2003 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!I loved the part when Inuyasha says"let kouga come he had no claim,the most.Maybe you should do a sequel.something like [the gang walking along and kouga appears and tries to take kagome but she says something like I already am inuyasha so I can't be with you kouga.] finish it the way you want,in fact you don't even have to do it like I just said but it would be great to see the reaction on kouga's face when kagome tells him something like that.agian loved your fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 22:26 CDT
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i must read all of ur fics over and over. ur a great author. |
Reviewed By: Inu's bitch On: August 31, 2003 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've very impressed. I've been reading a lot of Inuyasha fics lately. and this was the best lemon I've read in a while...I look forword to readin more of you work ;) *gets a nose bleed* |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are all your one shots this intense? I can't wait for a multi-chapter story from you. And I like how you slipped in that Koga line. Sneaky.
I put the ratings on this one. Sorry I forgot to do this on your other one.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are all your one shots this intense? I can't wait for a multi-chapter story from you. And I like how you slipped in that Koga line. Sneaky.
I put the ratings on this one. Sorry I forgot to do this on your other one.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 16:16 CDT
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amazing...sexy n cute at the same time... |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
One fine lemon. |
Reviewed By: Anime-Angel On: August 21, 2003 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it very much...I wish that it wasn't just a one shot. It was good all the same. Although you did clear up somethings(koga)you didn't clear up things like do they love each other. What about kikyou and stuff. Other then that it was very very good. |
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