Reviewed By: Maya2.0 On: June 13, 2004 16:45 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I really liked it. but in the summary you said it was Kurama's POV, but in the poem you said "those gentle green eyes" and that is something Heie would say. I don't care really. I just thought I'd let you know so you can fix it. Great!