| "Hiei Meets Fanfiction" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 18:48 CST
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k i love the story but 1 things missing. Paragraphs. I'm so sorry but I kept lossing my place in the first chappie. So pukease fix it if u have tkime I'm sure some other readers would appreshiate it 2.
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Reviewed By: Night Light Fairy (me lazy) On: October 21, 2003 21:02 CDT
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I love all your fanficcys! Alternate Uneverses! That's a good one! Update! please! I have around ten other supporters around! In case u didn't read all your reviews! Come on! U heard the ppl! update! A.S.A.P!
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Reviewed By: EirwenLai On: September 29, 2003 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far. The whole Hiei thinking they were alternate realities was kinda cute. I also like how he finds them kinky, to be honest I do too. Please post again soon!
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Reviewed By: DF again On: September 08, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU STILL HAVE YET 2 UPDATE!!!!! ME GET ANGRY!!!!! ME GOING TO EAT YOU ALIVE!!!!!! . . . who am i kidding. i read it again and it still funny! me getting sad here. *looks at reviews* u heard the ppl. KEEP WRITEING!! WE DEMAND IT!!! *innocent yukina look* plz! i promise not 2 eat u if u do!
- sadden darkfox |
Title: hehe...
Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy (not signed in) On: August 31, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe...you're baaad...
Ah yes. Can't wait for the *cough* wonders *cough* of fanfiction...*hehe* |
Reviewed By: mocha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol, Hiei discovers the wonderful fanfiction world! this story is very funny and cute! update soon! |
Reviewed By: darkdragoon On: August 23, 2003 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny funny is good plz write more plz plz plz plz |
Reviewed By: Dark Fox On: August 22, 2003 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can hear Hiei and his reaction to a yaoi fanfic now! "These ppl have some good ideas . . . now if only I could get away with it without getting decapitated!"
*grin* Write more! It's xtremly funy! I'm mispeling on purpose. Funy,continue!
Math lesson!
Continuing fic + Dark Fox = extremly happy fox that won't eat you alive!
Not continuing + Dark Fox = extremly pissed off fox that will slowly tourtue you untill you write!
(thret inspired by Hiei!)
Now write, ok?
- Happy (4 now) Dark Fox |
Reviewed By: Lavi-Sugar On: August 22, 2003 10:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Bwaaaahahahahaa!
That's so funny. The way Hiei reacts to the computer is just so... so... Well, it's cute and funny and somehow seems so perfect for him.
You have a really nice writing style. The story flows very smoothly, and it really holds the readers attention. It's not the kind of story you could stop reading halfway through.
Anyway, it's just gorgeous! ^_^ Keep writing, it really seems like you're going somewhere with this. And when you get there, I definitely want to read it.
Good luck!
-Lavi |
Reviewed By: animenightstalker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 23:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey this was great. Write more, write more. Anyway this was a great fic, and I can't wait to see Hiei, I meen your reactioc. Pease |
Reviewed By: guest On: August 19, 2003 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic is a roll-on-the-ground-laughter-!!!!!!
Please complete this fic PPPPPPPLLLLEEEAASSSSEE!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo_KuramaStalker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOH sounds really funny! pleaz finish! i want to see hiei's reaction if he reads a yaoi. what if it was a yaoi Lemon! that would be hilarious! |
