| "A Night at Home" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Night Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a really good story. It may have been your first time writing lime but I liked it. It wasn't that bad.
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Reviewed By: Jodi Anne On: June 06, 2005 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was incredible. No, seriously, it was. For a first lemon I must admit that you are not half bad when it comes down to this sort of thing. You are a great writer and I hope you keep up the good work. Oh, and most importantly, have fun with it! Lol. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...this story pwnz so frkn bad!
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: ChibiCutie On: August 17, 2004 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
frist lemon its alright so don't worry i know people will like it.
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Title: jshadowcat90@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: joei On: July 26, 2004 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was only your first lemon, i wouldn't have belived it. well it was good so keep it up.^_^
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Title: jshadowcat90@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: joei On: July 26, 2004 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: December 30, 2003 02:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good 4 ur 1st lemon. great job.
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Reviewed By: yami's slave On: November 15, 2003 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME!!! that was great i love y/yy! they are so hot and sexy...especially when turned on^_^! please write another one.
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic! Though, it was somewhat funny at parts. Are you gonna write another chapter?
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat On: September 03, 2003 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha copper,what little kinks Yugi&Yami can be.Kinks? Is that write? Anyways Good lemon nice first story. |
Reviewed By: BlackTigerXP [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 13:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, horny Yugi! Don't ya just love him? |
Reviewed By: Charlie On: August 19, 2003 15:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
You did very well for your first time, really it was great. I enjoyed reading it and hope you will continue to write more.....stories and lemons if you want because you did great. Two thumbs up. |
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 06:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me loved the lemon. Great job. And definitely good for your first one!!! __^
PLease make many more |
