| "Mokuba's Education" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Shaylo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 03:55 CDT
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Please PLEASE Make a sequal!! I want them to go all the way!!! Seto can teach him even more! I do agree with the reviewer that said you should translate the japanese. Tha'ts always my biggest complaint with most storys. The storys great but then no consideration for those who don't know japanese!
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Reviewed By: WeepingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 21:21 CDT
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make a sequel. pleeeassse!!!
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Reviewed By: -_-; On: December 21, 2003 16:50 CST
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The fanfic is nice. But the ending is quite stupid. Joey is Seto's boyfriend? After all Seto's obsession for Mokuba ...we discover that Jou is Seto's boyfriend... I love SetoxMokuba,and the fic would be nicer without that ending,that honestly doesn't have much sense.
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Reviewed By: Kurama-no-Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* f-finally.. no one will think I am a freak any longer! THANK YOU! THAAANK YOU!!! *bows in worshipness* YOU ARE GOD!!! Hee you know a lot eh? eh? EH? hehehehehe! I loved it though, Kaiba Brothers all da waaay!
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Reviewed By: ^____________________^ On: November 07, 2003 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So hard to find a good MokubaxSeto story these days... I found a good one! And I'm reviewing for it right now!
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl On: August 20, 2003 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the best seto x mokuba fics around! This was so cute! |
Reviewed By: not giving it On: August 20, 2003 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Random Person:You really are sick!
Not giving it:Who me?
RP:Yeah you!What's the deal with reading the incest story Huh?Not to mention their both underage and your 18!
NGI:What are you talking about?It was a story about how love has no limits,how it's willing to over come any obstacle...
RP:What are you talking about?It was a lemon story!NOTHING BUT LEMON I TELL YOU!
NGI:SHUT UP!So I like reading the incest story it's no big deal...it's not like I would ever want to go have sex with one of my brothers...
RP:So why don't you give them your name?
NGI:Because...I'm not here!*Runs away*
RP:Come back here!BISH-"
NGI:*runs up behid RP*Don't say it!
RP:Bis-
NGI:Quiet!
RP:Gotta fess up sometime...
NGI:Really?
RP:Yeah can't be a pussy forever.
NGI:But I like being a cat.*Cat ears and eyes appear*
RP:*Glare*
NGI:OK OK...I'm BISHOONENLOVER YA HEAR ME!HAPPY?!
RP:Good now the healing can being.
BL:What healing?
RP:There's no healing you'll be sick forever I'm going to...DISAPPEAR!*Blinks out*
BL:Why did I write this?It's suppose to be a review...Ok the story was good but writing with all the japanese and not translating was tedious.I only know a little because I am to lazy to read the 'How to learn japanese'book my bro bought.What can I say?I'm lazy. |
Reviewed By: YamiMelan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
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O_O Wowee... |
