| "Dark Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: February 17, 2005 20:41 CST
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Love this fic! Great beyond words! Read 'Broken Kitten' by Janta(wrong spelling) yet? Nice bit of Ryou torture and same couplings as yours without Seto being the bad guy; it's Marik instead. A very good fiction and I hate you for not updating but I suppose it's The Other one's fault?Shhhhhhhh! Don't atract that one! Even though I am hungry for some lemon....... Hehehe! Please I beg of you update for the love of Yaoi! I'm dying for some interesting stuff and today's offerings just aren't that good and/or they're too slow to update. Like someone we know! *glares at authors of the good fictions* You're doing great even though you didn't need me to tell you that! I'm using way to many exclaimation marks. Oh well thankies for writing this great bit of fanfition I really really enjoyed it and I'll read the rest of your stuff too. By the way "Broken Kitten" is on Fanfiction.net just incase you want to check it out. Ohh! and Koibito Yami! That's here one mm.org. Great fiction yet again! Thank You. DK;) P.S. Sorry for the long review! I'm prone to creepy ramblings. And this is where everyone looks at me weird. 0.o
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Reviewed By: kittyme On: August 22, 2004 11:49 CDT
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Finish please. It's really good and I want to see more you brilliant writer you.
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Reviewed By: EmeraldRains [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 21:25 CST
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See the thing is I don't want to be more organized as I move for one thought to another. It's a fic about more than poor abused Ryou. It's about the darker side of human nature which is why it's less dialog and more thought. Those thoughts aren't meant to flow together. For the purpose of the fic they need to be broken and jerky. Not being mean mind you I adore when people think enough of it to review just explaining why it's written like it is. Oh and the reason the chapters are so short are because I don't want people getting confused because I know it can be hard to read.
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Reviewed By: Mythic Curio On: January 29, 2004 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHEhehe! I'm # 10. You could be more organized when leading from one thought to another. Overall I think your fic is pretty good. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Love the fic
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 12:47 CST
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No more Ryou torture! He is so cute! Have the Yamis send Kaiba to the spirit relm! adios!
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Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please Please Continue. Its really getting interesting!
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Title: Awe
Reviewed By: Talentless On: December 20, 2003 10:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm stunned by the fantastic workings of such powerful writing! The sadism, the angst, the pain, the loss...no one could ever love you the way I do...Amazing. Always and forever, ~Talentless
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Reviewed By: Thera's Blaed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 11:26 CST
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Wow, I really love this fic. You are amazingly talented, and I can't wait for the next chapter. It's really well written, and extremely enjoyable! YAY! I hope that you post the next part soon! Ja ne, Blaed-chan
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Reviewed By: oui-chan On: December 11, 2003 18:18 CST
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hiya me like much very neat how ryou want yugi bad but yugi doesnt realy get what ryou mean who is blue eyed person is it change of heart the one who is doing this stuff?
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Reviewed By: Ykarzel() On: December 04, 2003 09:24 CST
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I've read this before and it distrubed me then.... heh. But it's one of those stories that gets under your skin and doesn't leave, and you find that weird things make you think about it, or it comes to mind when you're trying to sleep. And you know it'll never leave you alone, even after it's finished, because it's one of those stories that lets you see the truth and doesn't lie to you about how much things suck. o.O wow, that sounded all poetic and stuff. Yea. This was nice to reread and would be nicer if there was more ^_^
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Title: Oooooo
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooooo I really like this story and can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: BlackTigerXP [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 12:31 CDT
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Come on, I wanna see more! I like really hot semi-punk Ryou trying to get into Yugi's pants. ^^ |
Reviewed By: donut On: August 20, 2003 14:45 CDT
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Ok before I review, I have to celebrate for being first reviewer. *does victory dance* Ok, that's enough of that. I like it, I like it, I really really like it. I hope you continue and if you don't there will be serious trouble from a certain reviewer who just might be your biggest fan. Update |
