| "Trapped in Disneyland" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 22, 2003 21:56 CDT
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Hi Eleena. I told my friend about this fic. She says she really likes it and she wants to be in it.
Name: Airi
Race: Fire Demon
Looks: Waist high black hair with red streaks, blue eyes, thin, light skin, and about Hiei's height.
Clothes: A black tank top, a red skirt with blue pants under that have dark blue stripe on both pants leg.
Bishi: Sesshomaru(is that how you spell it?)
She says thank you. |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune On: August 22, 2003 21:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I knew it! I KNEW IT!!!! I knew you were teacher like!!! |
Reviewed By: Ian On: August 22, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm in this one. Thanks, Eleena! By the way, it has been suggested that I be an English teacher, but I don't like teaching. |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yup! I will!! Count on it! |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 22, 2003 13:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's okay Eleena. I hate camping too. Eew all the bugs. *shudders* Just try to continue this as soon as you get back. |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
You might have to wait a little longer then I intended Dream. 'Cause I'm going camping, AGAIN! My parents are so cruel! I had to suffer 1 whole week of caping last week, and now I'm going again!! So I don't think I'll be able to update very soon. Sorry..... |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 22, 2003 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's okay if I have to wait. I'm glad you at least put me in the fic. Thank you so much! What do you mean this fic is stupid? I think this is really funny. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 10:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Chapter 4 probably isn't as funny as it could be. But it's kindof hard to add like five people at a time while still trying to hang onto to the little tiny amount of plot that I have. |
Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox On: August 22, 2003 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aweosme! UPDATE SOON! ^________^ |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 21, 2003 14:54 CDT
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Aarrghh! Another mistake! It's Kurama *or* Hiei. Not Kurama of Hiei. |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 21, 2003 14:41 CDT
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Oops. Forgot to tell you something hehe. I want Inuyasha if I can't have Kurama of Hiei. So there. I can't believe I forgot that. |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 21, 2003 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha that was funny. I don't think you ripped off Arctics story. It's really great. Can I be in it?
Name: Dream
Race: Fire Demon
Looks: Long black hair with gold tips, brown eyes, and kind of tanned skin.
Clothes: Dark blue tank, black pants and boots.
If you can then THANX! |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 11:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh!! I forgot to tell you guys something. If you want to be paired with someone from Inu-Yasha or Gundam Wing you can be. Thats why I put Gundam Wing and Inu-Yasha in my summary thing! All you have to do is tell me that you want to be paired with them and I'll put them in the fic! It's that easy! Besides, I think I'm running out of YYH Bishies... Theres already gonna be some fighting over Jin..... |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 10:51 CDT
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Oh wow... Your all so nice! Except for Ian...
Jeez Ian!! Your one of my best internet buddies and you criticise me? And how the heck am I gonna make a profile for you? Practically the reason why I even use Anime characters and not make my own is because I'm not creative enough to make a good character! Maybe I'll just make you look like Alex...
As to all you other people that have reviewd, Of course you can be in my story!! And I'll post a new chapter as soon as my brain starts working again, which I pray is very soon. |
Reviewed By: katie On: August 20, 2003 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
forgot to rate the fic. |
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