| "Trapped in Disneyland" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 21, 2003 14:54 CDT
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Aarrghh! Another mistake! It's Kurama *or* Hiei. Not Kurama of Hiei. |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 21, 2003 14:41 CDT
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Oops. Forgot to tell you something hehe. I want Inuyasha if I can't have Kurama of Hiei. So there. I can't believe I forgot that. |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 21, 2003 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha that was funny. I don't think you ripped off Arctics story. It's really great. Can I be in it?
Name: Dream
Race: Fire Demon
Looks: Long black hair with gold tips, brown eyes, and kind of tanned skin.
Clothes: Dark blue tank, black pants and boots.
If you can then THANX! |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 11:11 CDT
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Oh!! I forgot to tell you guys something. If you want to be paired with someone from Inu-Yasha or Gundam Wing you can be. Thats why I put Gundam Wing and Inu-Yasha in my summary thing! All you have to do is tell me that you want to be paired with them and I'll put them in the fic! It's that easy! Besides, I think I'm running out of YYH Bishies... Theres already gonna be some fighting over Jin..... |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 10:51 CDT
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Oh wow... Your all so nice! Except for Ian...
Jeez Ian!! Your one of my best internet buddies and you criticise me? And how the heck am I gonna make a profile for you? Practically the reason why I even use Anime characters and not make my own is because I'm not creative enough to make a good character! Maybe I'll just make you look like Alex...
As to all you other people that have reviewd, Of course you can be in my story!! And I'll post a new chapter as soon as my brain starts working again, which I pray is very soon. |
Reviewed By: katie On: August 20, 2003 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
forgot to rate the fic. |
Reviewed By: Katie On: August 20, 2003 21:45 CDT
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i love this story i was i the fic trapped in wallmart too! i want to be in the fic please! shoulder lenght light brown hair silverish blue eyes. wearing blue jeans and a black tanktop. i want to be with jin! and i have a sword straped to my back. i love sugar!!! |
Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, hey, HEY! EVIL PERSON UP THERE! *points up* That wasn't ripping off! That was BORROWING. Or, MODELING. I have no problem with it! Hmph. Yeah, I know, that was snoody. Ah, well! As the authoress of Trapped in Walmart, I really didn't mind at all. So there! =P Ha ha ha.
Anyway, I reread this story, AND STILL LAUGHED! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Awesoem story, udate soon! ^_________^ |
Reviewed By: Ian158 On: August 20, 2003 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style was good, Eleena, but your spelling and grammer hurt me as an English-speaking person. Originality maybe shouldn't have been so high. You admitted ripping off something about Walmart. But I've never seen anything like it, so a 10 it is! I enjoyed reading it, so tell me when you do another chapter. By the way, in case you didn't figure it out by my name or perfect English, I'm Ian. Good work. Put me in it too! I wanna beat up Yusuke too. Just invent a profile for me. You know me fairly well, so I trust you to present me fairly. |
Reviewed By: Kitsune 005 On: August 20, 2003 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your fic and I like it especially when you got into the candy store and sang pirate songs. You said other people could be in it. Would you please put me and my friend in it?
Heres my description
name: Gina
race: demi wolf demon
bishi: Yusuke
weapon: big sword or mallet and trade mark evil laugh Bwa ha ha
I have silver hair, blue eyes, and wear a blue kimono. I also have a silver wolf tail that when it is pulled prepare to meet my mallet or big sword.
Heres my friends
Name: Kiku
race: evil demi goddess
weapon: Has power to control living souls (Kiku is creepy)and her trade mark death stare
She has black hair, green eyes, and wears a black kimono.
bishi: Jin
Please add more soon. And if you put us in thanks in advance. |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 17:28 CDT
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I rock?? *starts crying* ThankYou so much!!! You have no idea how much that means to me! Now I'll deffinatly update! Well, as soon as my brain starts working again. It kinda shut down after I wrote the third chappie... |
Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox (Laughing to hard to sign in) On: August 20, 2003 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHOOO!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!! And you even put Kuronue in it! HUZZAH! I don't know Gundam Wing very well, but this ROCKS OUT, MAN! ^_^ So much sugar... I saw Darkness Falls at a sleepover, and we couldn't sleep without the lights all night!! Anyway, great story! You rock! Update soon! ^_______^ |
Reviewed By: AnimeAngel007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PUTTING ME INTO YOUR FANFIC!!!^^ I'M SOOOO HAPPY!!!! |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 16:18 CDT
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Your quite wellcome Angel-Chan! Now you can return the favor by updating some of your fics!
By the way, the reason why it says updated by Chapter 1 is because I fixed a mistake that was bothering me, O.K?
I really need to work on this fic... But I like my internet time... |
Reviewed By: Sacura On: August 24, 2003 15:55 CDT
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Awsome fic Eleena |
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