| "Trapped in Disneyland" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
HEY!! It said it was updated, and it isn't! WHAT'S WRONG WITH MEDIAMINER?!!!?
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Reviewed By: Midnitedreams [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 19:58 CDT
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When are you gonna update? You haven't updated for a LONG LONG time. So hurry up please. And put my friend kuramaluver in. Her profile is in one of the previous reviews. |
Title: SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune (I'm even to lazy to write a fic) On: September 08, 2003 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Im sorry! My brains broken! I can't think!!! And now with school.... I'm sorry.... I understand if you want to threaten me with big mallets and chain saws..... Hey! I try and kill Ian everyday! |
Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 00:34 CDT
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Where have you gone, El? YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN SO LONG!! I'M DIEING HERE!! X_X |
Title: great fic!
Reviewed By: z_dawg On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey eleena!! great fic!! what the heck r u talking about it being stupid?! anyways, if u ever want to add anyone in ::cough:: zarreen ::cough:: just ask!! remember to read mine!! who knows when u might just pop up!!! |
Reviewed By: Kirara_Girl On: August 23, 2003 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^ It's just as funny and INSANE as trapped in Walmart. ^_^ Can I please be in this fic? And please update soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 22, 2003 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi Eleena. I told my friend about this fic. She says she really likes it and she wants to be in it.
Name: Airi
Race: Fire Demon
Looks: Waist high black hair with red streaks, blue eyes, thin, light skin, and about Hiei's height.
Clothes: A black tank top, a red skirt with blue pants under that have dark blue stripe on both pants leg.
Bishi: Sesshomaru(is that how you spell it?)
She says thank you. |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune On: August 22, 2003 21:47 CDT
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I knew it! I KNEW IT!!!! I knew you were teacher like!!! |
Reviewed By: Ian On: August 22, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm in this one. Thanks, Eleena! By the way, it has been suggested that I be an English teacher, but I don't like teaching. |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:58 CDT
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Yup! I will!! Count on it! |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 22, 2003 13:56 CDT
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It's okay Eleena. I hate camping too. Eew all the bugs. *shudders* Just try to continue this as soon as you get back. |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:24 CDT
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You might have to wait a little longer then I intended Dream. 'Cause I'm going camping, AGAIN! My parents are so cruel! I had to suffer 1 whole week of caping last week, and now I'm going again!! So I don't think I'll be able to update very soon. Sorry..... |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 22, 2003 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's okay if I have to wait. I'm glad you at least put me in the fic. Thank you so much! What do you mean this fic is stupid? I think this is really funny. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 10:44 CDT
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Chapter 4 probably isn't as funny as it could be. But it's kindof hard to add like five people at a time while still trying to hang onto to the little tiny amount of plot that I have. |
Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox On: August 22, 2003 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aweosme! UPDATE SOON! ^________^ |
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