| "The Ouji" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rchan On: April 02, 2004 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this fic. it's better then everything elese i've read. I hope you wright many sequles and prequles to this. Please forgive my spelling i'm in school and not supposed to be wrighting reviews. Please wright more soon! Thank you! Wow! my longest review yet!
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Reviewed By: 12093fhdjzskjdfkssbbb On: March 12, 2004 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE FINISH!!
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: February 10, 2004 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice yummy story! i luv it, i need it, please write again soon
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Reviewed By: Ominous Prophecy On: December 03, 2003 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved all the chapters thus far and love this one too!
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Reviewed By: Phoenix 3:16 On: November 12, 2003 15:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like your fic. Punish raditz, and Vegeta and Gioku live happily ever after. Yay!!!
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Reviewed By: gemini66 On: October 28, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a new twist i luv it keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great story. Usually I don't read yaoi, but this one is awesome. I LOVE the way you write. Your descriptions are so vivid and imaginative and that makes the story SOO much more engaging than the average PWP. Keep updating!
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: October 27, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic.please update soon.I know how you feel If my mom and dad caught me reading this she probably I'am crazy or something. parents they just want unstand!!
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Title: MajinOujiVegeta
Reviewed By: MajinoujiVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If u do not update this fic and keep up with such fantastic work u shall hear from me, soon.... I absolutely love it, please please please make it long, very very graphic and keep into the same character as u have done with the last two chapters, I shall stop by to see if it has been updated or not so i do beg of u write write write.... Until then. urs truely The Ouji
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: October 04, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor goku.I hope you update soon!! this story is geting good.
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Reviewed By: gemini66 On: August 24, 2003 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start. oh raditz so need to be beat and vegeta taking it out on sweet little goku. anyways I cant wait to read what happens next. write again soon. |
Reviewed By: Dark Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 22:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice start. Your writing style and orginality are quite good. I do hope that you would continue this. |
Reviewed By: star On: August 21, 2003 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh it was a good story, never thought about DBZ mofia story. I thing you need to write more. PLEASE!!! I need to Know what happens to Goku and Vegeta!!! |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it even though sweet Goku got hurt *sobs*, stupid Raditz it's all his fault, Turles better go get him and fast. I hope you continue and put up a new chapter soon
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Reviewed By: candy00 On: August 20, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey wonderful start. baka raditz and vegeta,doing that to goku. anyways I cant wait to read what happens next. write again soon. |
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