| "The Ouji" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: loussi On: May 11, 2006 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww.It's ok, take care of your father fro as long as you need, after all family is the most important.Your story is great and you'll sure be welcome whenever you decide to write again. take care
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 7: I am very sorry about your father. I really do hope he gets better and best wishes to your family. Family always comes first so I shall not give up hope because I know the feeling. :D
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Title: woww
Reviewed By: siw-wa On: March 11, 2006 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fufufufu, the story is delicious! Love you!
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Reviewed By: Karalee On: December 18, 2005 03:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More Goku torture and lots of Vegeta angst. Highly descriptive is best, especialy when dealing with guys as hot as this. When will we see Vegeta's wife and how will she react to his INTREST in his new pet. I can't wait to see how Goku'll react to seeing his uncle now. Just who are the "most trusted men" that guard Goku and will he ever get out of that room. Kimonos are sorta nice, but leather is better and besides Vegeta would want to show off what's his. Sorta like makin' a face and saying 'Nyah all mine'! E-mail me... divinestardragon@yahoo.com I'm not tellin' ya to ignore your studies or anything, but I need more. I like twisted, a lot!!
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: VegezLush On: May 18, 2005 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love your fic. I think your a great writer and I hope you write more soon!! ^.^ xXx
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Reviewed By: sierra ruffner On: March 06, 2005 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, that was very intertaining! can't wait for the next chapter! please write it soon!
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Title: The Ouji
Reviewed By: Frederikke On: October 08, 2004 04:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LLLLOOOOVVVEEEE YOUR STORY PPPLLLEEEEAAASSSSEEEE DON'T ABANDONED IT WRITE MORE AND UPDATE SOON
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Title: rchan101@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Rchan On: August 31, 2004 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! but will you please add another chapter soon? Thank you!
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: April 26, 2004 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story so far. i also love v/g fics. splease write more and update soon.
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Reviewed By: OujiVegeta On: April 09, 2004 03:13 CDT
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Please tell me your going to continue with this ^_^...i must have more now *or at least soon* i swear, such delightful tease, i love it.
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Reviewed By: spikeilike On: April 08, 2004 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew! This is hotter then a vindaloo curry! I was a DB virgin, until I read this and now i `m hooked :0) Please update, as soon as real life allows, I need my fix, wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rchan On: April 02, 2004 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this fic. it's better then everything elese i've read. I hope you wright many sequles and prequles to this. Please forgive my spelling i'm in school and not supposed to be wrighting reviews. Please wright more soon! Thank you! Wow! my longest review yet!
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Reviewed By: 12093fhdjzskjdfkssbbb On: March 12, 2004 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE FINISH!!
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: February 10, 2004 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice yummy story! i luv it, i need it, please write again soon
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Reviewed By: Ominous Prophecy On: December 03, 2003 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved all the chapters thus far and love this one too!
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