| "The Ouji" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Phoenix 3:16 On: November 12, 2003 15:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like your fic. Punish raditz, and Vegeta and Gioku live happily ever after. Yay!!!
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Reviewed By: gemini66 On: October 28, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a new twist i luv it keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great story. Usually I don't read yaoi, but this one is awesome. I LOVE the way you write. Your descriptions are so vivid and imaginative and that makes the story SOO much more engaging than the average PWP. Keep updating!
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: October 27, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic.please update soon.I know how you feel If my mom and dad caught me reading this she probably I'am crazy or something. parents they just want unstand!!
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Title: MajinOujiVegeta
Reviewed By: MajinoujiVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If u do not update this fic and keep up with such fantastic work u shall hear from me, soon.... I absolutely love it, please please please make it long, very very graphic and keep into the same character as u have done with the last two chapters, I shall stop by to see if it has been updated or not so i do beg of u write write write.... Until then. urs truely The Ouji
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: October 04, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor goku.I hope you update soon!! this story is geting good.
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Reviewed By: gemini66 On: August 24, 2003 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start. oh raditz so need to be beat and vegeta taking it out on sweet little goku. anyways I cant wait to read what happens next. write again soon. |
Reviewed By: Dark Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 22:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice start. Your writing style and orginality are quite good. I do hope that you would continue this. |
Reviewed By: star On: August 21, 2003 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh it was a good story, never thought about DBZ mofia story. I thing you need to write more. PLEASE!!! I need to Know what happens to Goku and Vegeta!!! |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it even though sweet Goku got hurt *sobs*, stupid Raditz it's all his fault, Turles better go get him and fast. I hope you continue and put up a new chapter soon
Agent -182- |
Reviewed By: candy00 On: August 20, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey wonderful start. baka raditz and vegeta,doing that to goku. anyways I cant wait to read what happens next. write again soon. |
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