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Title: Hot Sex
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELL! That was your FIRST?! That was as Paris Hilton would say, "Totally HOT!" I loved that ending with the mental debate, but I'm sure that's not a very hard one to figure out. ^-^ lol. I hope you write more!!! Keep it up! Maybe you could write one for Goten and Bra? Don't hold back any good juicy stuff!! Keep them lemons, lemonade, lemon pies and so on...comin' in!! Tchao! ^-^
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Title: Hot Sex
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 23, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is a very well-written fic that uses a cliché topic. It was interesting and it certainly didn't suck. I think you should keep writing. I really enjoyed this fic.
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Reviewed By: TheAntiChrist [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one.. I liked how it almost got right to the point... One of the better (although shorter)Vegeta/Bulma fanfics... BULMA AND VEGETA FOREVER!
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Reviewed By: moonchild_kei On: April 24, 2004 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. One of the better Bulma and Vegeta fics I've read. I like the way you write Vegeta...kinda nice. I like the short pissy men ^^ wahah... (p.s. Bulma/Vegeta isn't my favorite couple...my favorite is Goku/Vegeta is.)
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Title: nice one
Reviewed By: lydis On: March 17, 2004 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job I lov the work please do more^^
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: February 27, 2004 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me loved the lemon keep bringing them up LOL! loved it UPDATE SOON OK ! LATER!
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Reviewed By: spini On: February 27, 2004 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yeah it´s really hot sex! I think you should definitely write more B/V lemons!
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Reviewed By: Chas On: November 02, 2003 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's one of the best lemon's I've ever read. Yes, do more. Definatly.
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Title: This is good!
Reviewed By: Descendant078 On: September 30, 2003 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a hot story! I was sad to see that it was only a one shot. Keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: desceb]\\\ On: September 30, 2003 00:32 CDT
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Reviewed By: Emmy On: August 24, 2003 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really Really Cool ! Come on ! More of B/V Stories! I haven't read a so good lemon in a long time *sigh* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 10:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great job. I could definitely see them abandoning their own party for something a little more exciting. ^__^ |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 20:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! That was really hot! Great job on the lemon. I'll be looking for more form you in the future! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 21, 2003 20:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE BULMA AND VEGETA STORIES!!! Next time though, try doing one about a mating hunt. |
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