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Reviewed By: cra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved this fanfic I'm am a sex freak also my name is Michelle and I call myself hotypan. The fanfic was alright I also read better, but on the lemon parts I say you got me wet in the you know where. "I am sorry that's probably TMI"
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 11:47 CDT
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I agree with Free-sprit on the 'I love ya' thing. He love her, ofcourse. :P ... But I don't think that he will ever say it. Well, maybe in a very sprecial situation, where he has to face that he is indeed not a muderous killer anymore, but a loving husband, with a bad-man shirt. I might tell her someday. I dunno. good story. :)
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 03:47 CDT
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Okay, I just wrote a reveiw to this story, and then I go back to read on of your others great stories, and then..! You have only written one? may I ask, WHY? You are such a great writer...! Come on, please write some more, I would like to read some quality V/B writing, and therefor you better get on it! Pretty please? Come on guys, who's with me???
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Title: niiiice.
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 03:39 CDT
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I'm really impressed, this was your first? really good! There was only one thing that I didn't like about this story, and that was when Vegeta said that he loved her. Ofcourse Vegeta love Bulma, but I don't think that he would ever say it like that.. I don't know, I've read one fic, where he says it where it sounds right... And that fic is kiiiinda dirty. involves a great deal of S/M... :P oh well, whatever, I really loved it, keep it up :)
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Title: Hot Sex
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELL! That was your FIRST?! That was as Paris Hilton would say, "Totally HOT!" I loved that ending with the mental debate, but I'm sure that's not a very hard one to figure out. ^-^ lol. I hope you write more!!! Keep it up! Maybe you could write one for Goten and Bra? Don't hold back any good juicy stuff!! Keep them lemons, lemonade, lemon pies and so on...comin' in!! Tchao! ^-^
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Title: Hot Sex
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 17:47 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 23, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is a very well-written fic that uses a cliché topic. It was interesting and it certainly didn't suck. I think you should keep writing. I really enjoyed this fic.
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Reviewed By: TheAntiChrist [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one.. I liked how it almost got right to the point... One of the better (although shorter)Vegeta/Bulma fanfics... BULMA AND VEGETA FOREVER!
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Reviewed By: moonchild_kei On: April 24, 2004 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. One of the better Bulma and Vegeta fics I've read. I like the way you write Vegeta...kinda nice. I like the short pissy men ^^ wahah... (p.s. Bulma/Vegeta isn't my favorite couple...my favorite is Goku/Vegeta is.)
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Title: nice one
Reviewed By: lydis On: March 17, 2004 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job I lov the work please do more^^
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: February 27, 2004 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me loved the lemon keep bringing them up LOL! loved it UPDATE SOON OK ! LATER!
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Reviewed By: spini On: February 27, 2004 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yeah it´s really hot sex! I think you should definitely write more B/V lemons!
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Reviewed By: Chas On: November 02, 2003 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's one of the best lemon's I've ever read. Yes, do more. Definatly.
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Title: This is good!
Reviewed By: Descendant078 On: September 30, 2003 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a hot story! I was sad to see that it was only a one shot. Keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: desceb]\\\ On: September 30, 2003 00:32 CDT
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