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Reviewed By: layla-xd [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 06:55 CDT
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Great, Great, GREAT! I´m so falling for this fic... gods, this chapter was so _beautiful_, I think I´ve never read a lemon that was so full of real emotions, not just fucking eacht other... Oh my, you´ve written this so well, it´s really awesome! I like the plot, it´ original and something new and you characterize Yohji and Ran just _so_ damn good! I mean, there a bit different from the series, but that´s okay because it´s AU and because you wrote it all very logical so I can totally empathize with both of them... I so hope you continue this fanfiction!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 09:58 CST
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ok i've been a slacker and apparently never reviewed half your stories...j'adore!
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Reviewed By: buenagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 16:13 CDT
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This was an awesome fic. I really enjoyed it. Hope it continues... thx for the fic...
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Reviewed By: Shalorn On: April 06, 2004 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done, beautifully put together and amazingly inticing... i can't wait for more (hint hint)
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Title: StarHoshi
Reviewed By: StarHoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 04:47 CST
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Wonderful please more. Feed my craving. I'll feed yours all ya want. More story please? I'll promise you anything in my power
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Reviewed By: StarHoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 04:47 CST
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Wonderful please more. Feed my craving. I'll feed yours all ya want. More story please? I'll promise you anything in my power.
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: December 21, 2003 23:39 CST
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My pissing and moaning worked?!? Well now, since that's been established, you're never gunna get me to shut up ~_^ Honestly, this is such well written work, you have great agreement with the tenses and your descriptions are lovely. Happy ^_^!!! Please continue to write ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: December 10, 2003 21:34 CST
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I will whimper and whine and piss and moan until you write more. Caveat author!!! I love this fic terribly and have been waiting for updates for ages. Though, I do understand writing can not be always easy, but I wanted to let you know that I feel this fic is DEFINITELY worth continuing. And yes, I had reviewed before under the same name lacking the numbers, so I am obsessive ^_^
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Reviewed By: Flicker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 18:59 CST
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You're a great writer period- but this one's one of your best! It's nice to let the Weiss boys be not-assassins, 'cuz that theme can get kinda monotonous after a while, but you made it so they're not too much different from themselves. Much, much happies, and I hope you keep posting! ^__^ Ja-ne!
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Reviewed By: Deceased Laugh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't mean to sound like a rabid fangirl or anything... I've every single thing you've ever posted on your site or other fanfic sites. I absolutely love your writing style and your originality. ...*laughs stupidly* Anywho, the real review... I love the way you've characterized Youji and Ran in this. Schuldich also makes an great jealous ex-lover! Cheers!!
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Title: *smile*
Reviewed By: Schneekoenigin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow ...
I really love it! I've written a comment for the first chapter but now I must say that it is quite an amazing story.
Please excuse me for my really bad english, my native language is german. In german I could tell you how much I like it and my sentences would really make sense, but since I don't know if you understand german ...
After all I just wanted to say, I really like to know the rest of the story ^-^
Bye, Lee ^^ |
Reviewed By: Balis On: August 23, 2003 17:42 CDT
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Wonderful story! Almost like Pretty Woman but not. -_^ Possibly better. |
Reviewed By: Nickythetokyoboy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 13:56 CDT
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I love this story, I read it on FF.net and fell in love. I'm happy you decided to post it on Mm.org. It is splended and I hope you write another like it soon. |
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. possibly i'm biased or something, but you're writing style is above par, and you don't assume that all fanfics need be dumbed down to be read. you have artestry that allows your sentences to be readable yet not idiotic. happy day ^_^ i love Yohji as he is: the same as his normal personality but in an AU. you didn't screw with him too badly. Ran is a bit OOC, but if this story were to progress at any rate faster than a snail's pace, that's necessary. i wait with baited breath to see how you will make Schuldig. i especially can't wait to read more of the interaction between Yohji and Ran as well as the yet to come interactions between S and Y as well as S and R. do continue writing!! |
Reviewed By: Schneekoenigin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
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Sounds quite interesting!
It's a great idea to not let them be assasines for a while. But in the moment one can't say much because the chapter is a little bit small!
Write on, I sure will read it.
Bye, Lee ^^ |
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