| "Heated Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 18, 2005 16:05 CDT
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Tea coming between Yugi and Yami. How original. NOT! Tea isn't a bitchy jealous slut. I hate to break it to ya, but she isn't. You hate Tea, fine. That seems to be common for some reason. Just don't have her so OOC! I like Tea when she acts like herself. Who could like her if she was like your story's Tea? Grow up, stop Tea bashing, and come up with a real plot.
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Reviewed By: Fourth Yami On: November 21, 2004 15:42 CST
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Let's see, a Yami+Yugi story, a Yami+Yugi lemon, and Anzu bashing? I LOVE IT!!!
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Title: grrness...
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 18:50 CDT
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I love this story! You are the cliffmaster! this so being, can you please PLEASE finish?
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Reviewed By: Tayko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe hi i love this fic!!!*ready's her sword for anzu* kan I kill anzu? hehe*smirks evil* pwease? keep on writing much love ~*Tayko*~
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 03, 2004 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Yugi. Oh, well, Yami will make it ^ 2 him. Pleaze continue.
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Reviewed By: yamiyugifan On: December 07, 2003 19:43 CST
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Lemony goodness^_^ need lemons NEED LEMONS!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Change Of Heart On: November 09, 2003 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I just have to say is that I think Yami and Yugi make a good couple. and I dont see them with anyother, esp Anzu(Tea) And Im not really into Yaoi, I just think that if you make a good couple you make a good couple. I really dont see it as Yaoi/ or non Yaoi its just love.(well maybe its not lol) But they look so cute together lol. So far I like the story, and would love to have this finished. Good Job so far.
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Reviewed By: Flowers On: October 26, 2003 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah....my favorite kind of fic...a Yuugi/Yami fic with Anzu bashing. I TRULY LOVE IT!!!!! Please update!!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 21:17 CDT
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This was a great chapter! Anzu is such a bitch in this chapter! I hate her so (cussing) I wonder what Yami has in store for Yugi? Well, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 04:15 CDT
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Write more damn you!!! Hey about the Yaoi boy... That was the funniest thing I ever read... See now you have to write more... 'Help' the poor yaoi boy out.... HELP US OUT WE WANT OUR YAOI LEMONS!!!!!! You're to good at this to stop now!!!!!!! |
Title: Evil cliffie
Reviewed By: YamiMelan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 13:55 CDT
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Yes, you are truly evil in providing a cliffie for a lemon...write on! |
Reviewed By: Horse On: August 23, 2003 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iwould have rated enjoyment higher if you hadn't cut me off at the good part!
SEQUEL! CHAPTER 2 POST NOW!!!
PS proofread please, makes fic soo much better |
Reviewed By: Kinnomorri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this. The plot is just the tinyest bit cliched, but its very well writen and I enjoyed reading it iminsly. I hope to see more soon, email me when you update PWEASE???? |
Reviewed By: first_ reviewer On: August 22, 2003 19:16 CDT
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That was a kick ass story and I hope you will continue and make an equally interesting lemon, Yeah baby yeah. Hey how old are you, are you in college or highschool (just curious you don't have to answer, but it'd be very nice if you did *get's yugi to pout with puppy dog eyes* ahhhhhhhhh, how cute.) NEwayz, plz continue. |
