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Title: its very nice
Reviewed By: midnight_snack On: September 16, 2005 16:40 CDT
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plz keep writing i want to read the whole story so cut us some slack and make a new chap plz?
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: blackcandle On: August 25, 2005 18:05 CDT
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i love your work so far keep it going for the reviewers and the rest of your redears
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Reviewed By: SweetyPieRin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is a really great story! I love stories where you feel all the emotion the characters feel! This story definitly fits that description! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 19:01 CDT
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Damn! Update plese!!!
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Title: Cute, funny, and sexy!!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty (I'm not logged in) On: February 03, 2004 06:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, sorry got to say it, GURLLY!!!! Oh, and that was nice of you to put Inu on a plane so that he MIGHT be able to see Kagy again!! THANK YOU!!!!! Talk at ya later, BYE!!! ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I know it is hard to write stories from personal reviews... take your time.. but it is a really good fic, please continue ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 17:34 CST
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You must continue!!! I read this when it first came out and I could never find it again!!!!!! I'm addicted! Keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shit woman! THis is very good! I should like to read more!! LOL... I really liked it.. You should continue!
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. It's so...what's that word...different. For once I don't have to tell an author to make their chapters longer. Your chapters are the perfect length. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: plz On: December 20, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plzplzplzplzplzplz update as soon as you can!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kouga-sanLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. That part when Inu Yasha was crying really choked me up. I almost thought I would cry. Well...not really but I hope you update soon!
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Title: ...........
Reviewed By: KikyoKiller [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! are you CRAZY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! i LOVE your story! GEEZE! You have to keep writing! PLEASE!!!!!!!! If only for me, I have to read the rest! So PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!! UPDATE! ~~~~~KikyoKiller~~~~~~~~~~~ P.S. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Hope you update soon!
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Title: A pleasant surprise
Reviewed By: Guruhoro [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
What I expected from the grammatical and spelling quality of you review and pre-'fic amble, was a low-quality mass 'fic. But when the story got started, I found myself looking at intelligent sentences with a minimal amount of errors. Your writer's ability shone through the text clearly, too bad English is such a simple language; I believe you could reach better results with something more flexible, like my native language Finnish. Some punctuation was missing and sometimes there was a dot instead of a colon, but that was really minor. Great style on the flow of thought; the flashbacks came naturally from everyday movements, giving the characters some depth. I can't really tell by this short clip whether the story is boring angst or high-emotion tragic drama, but I put great faith in your potential. Do write more, Runishie-san! I will add this story to my favourites, and that happens extremely rarely...
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Reviewed By: crissyrose86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it can't wait for more.
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