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Title: Breathtaking
Reviewed By: D On: February 26, 2004 18:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep up the good work. I check my email everyday to see if I have received an update of Forget me not. You don't know how great it feels when I do get one and I click that link and I get pulled into this wonderful version of inuyasha's world that you have made please continue. I look forward to future chapters.
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Title: Hello?
Reviewed By: Spica(not logged on) On: February 26, 2004 18:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi again. Anyways, this time, I have a question. Where did you think of the idea for the bridge. I've been dieing trying to find something that would explain how Sesshoumaru went from hell to life. Could I use your idea for my story Forbidden Desire. It's okay if you need to read it first but I would really appreciated(sp?) if you would let me know. Thank You!
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Reviewed By: Maliksgirl1125 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 15:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so great! Naraku DID have a good sige too him! I knew it! I LOVE the story! Please update soon!!!!
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Title: love this
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 20:48 PST
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I've read up to your chapter 22 and your story is so very good. Though I do have to say I'm upset about the inu choosing kikyo part but its good that he realized that he made a mistake. Can't wait to finish reading. BUH-BYE ^__^
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Reviewed By: InuSan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 20:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur an amazing writer... I can feel so much emotion i'm on the verge of crying... actually, i cried once or twice... Feeling Sesshoumaru's pain... very touching!! U are amazing and i can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry *too lazy to log in* On: February 23, 2004 23:04 PST
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good chapter ^-^ heh, I was actually going 'go Naraku' when he was pinned to the tree,and when he killed Kikyo. normally, I'm like 'kill Narku, and Kikyo' Naraku being the greater of the 2 evils, generally. ^-^ but I was actually wanting him to do something. heh,that's the first and probably the last time I'll ever like Naraku; for any reason. I really like the part when Naraku is pinned to the tree, and is thinking, and yeah, that was an interesting little part. ^-^ *laughs* ya know Sesshomaru, you really shouldn't give someone who was just dead a hug that'll squeez them to death. ^-^ heh, those kind of hugs hurt if the person hugging you is kind of strong. anyways, that last part, with Kagome and Naraku....so sad, in a way. *laughs a bit* I'm suprised that when she HUGGED Naraku, Sesshie and Inu didn't have heartattacks. good chappie ^-^ can't wait for the next one, with the aftermath. heh later ^-^
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Reviewed By: Vic_18 On: February 23, 2004 18:35 PST
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I just read the latest two chapters, I had been prolonging the one before it. And Wow, I think I forgot how good, a good fanfic was. I had forgotten what a real ture fanfic was like. It's Great! I love this, and I really liked that naraku scene. Please update soon, cant wait to see how this storys gonna end.
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: February 23, 2004 14:59 PST
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How do you post on A Single Spark? Oh please tell me! I have my story that I want to post! Oh yeah, great chapter! I'm glad you showed a side of Naraku that isn't seen that often. I personally don't like him, but I really loved that piece. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 13:47 PST
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Kool PLz UPDATE ASAP ok i NEEd 2 now wat happed ok PLz UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 13:33 PST
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NICE! ^-^ Kago-chan lives! ^-^ Yay! ^-^ I'm glad Kikyou was set to rest in peace. ^-^ I have no clue why I am smiling so much! ^-^ Here have a cookie! ^-^ eheeheehee! ^-~
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 13:28 PST
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Excellent chapters. Missed reviewing the last couple, sorry bout that. From the looks of things though, Inuyasha isn't going to be fighting Sesshoumaru too hard for Kagome now. That last bit sounded more like a concerned friend than that of an "active suitor". Sessho on the other hand ... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 12:44 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AwaWaWaWawWawawwaWa!!!! Naraku died in peace... as did kikyo... i love this story!
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Title: Superb!
Reviewed By: MKyrissaean [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 10:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible chapter, as usual! You're a very good writer! I'm looking forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 04:55 PST
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That chapter was sooo good!!!!!!!! Way cool fight scene!!!! And Naraku helped, thats like someone walking up behind you and slapping you the butt, did not see it coming!!!! I can't wait for the next chapters!!!!!!!! But I really don't want to go to school today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kurama no Miko2003 (too lazy to sign in) On: February 23, 2004 01:12 PST
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Interesting . . . that was a sad battle, though. And I thought you killed Kagome. Good thing you didn't, 'cuz I like Kagome more than Kikyou. ~ Kurama no Miko2003
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