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Reviewed By: RBM On: December 30, 2003 17:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwe that was sweet. she should have kissed him on the lips.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 17:53 PST
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That chapter was sooooo sweet!!!!!! Is the next chapter going to have Iun-baka in it??? Yume is it a bad idea to give CF the chocolate while she's drinking wine??? Well if it is please watch out because my muse gave her the chocolate today at the muse's spa ^_^; sorry!
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Title: Awww....
Reviewed By: Fasha Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 17:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww...this is so adorible. i love this.
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Reviewed By: Fenikkusu Ice (not logged on) On: December 30, 2003 17:20 PST
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(formerly known as Sweetapple) That chapter was very well done. I love it! So many sweet moments. As much as I love those moments, I still wonder what evil plans Naraku and Kikyo have. And will Inuyasha and Kagome become friends again? Somehow I can't shake the feeling that Kikyo would use Inuyasha in her plans. Well I g2g. See ya in 2004!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu-chan On: December 30, 2003 17:14 PST
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Damn! Leaver it right there why don't you!! Come on....did u catch on yet? I WANT MORE!!!! DAMNIT!
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 16:58 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: Are sure it's not necessary? Because you know I could... just kidding. This is again great and wonderful. By the way CF, here, I'm sorry it's late, *hands CF 20lb chocolate bar* Merry Christams. I gave one to Shippo and Rin too. Shippo and Rin: We still have ours! We're not even halfway done! Sesshoumaru: This is as Isis says great and wonderful. However, I'm not sure I'd take advantage of a female that way while training... Kagome: *in background* Hey Isis, isn't that what Sesshoumaru did to you when he was teaching you how to fight? Isis: *nods* Yep just like I told you and Sango! See, he can be nice and not completely psycho! Sango and Kagome: *giggle while Sesshoumaru runs over to Isis trying to shut her up.* Isis: *manages to get Sesshoumaru's hand off her mouth long enough to talk* Anyways, Happy New Year to you Yume and CF! Update soon and have lots of fun!!
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 16:58 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: Are sure it's not necessary? Because you know I could... just kidding. This is again great and wonderful. By the way CF, here, I'm sorry it's late, *hands CF 20lb chocolate bar* Merry Christams. I gave one to Shippo and Rin too. Shippo and Rin: We still have ours! We're not even halfway done! Sesshoumaru: This is as Isis says great and wonderful. However, I'm not sure I'd take advantage of a female that way while training... Kagome: *in background* Hey Isis, isn't that what Sesshoumaru did to you when he was teaching you how to fight? Isis: *nods* Yep just like I told you and Sango! See, he can be nice and not completely psycho! Sango and Kagome: *giggle while Sesshoumaru runs over to Isis trying to shut her up.* Isis: *manages to get Sesshoumaru's hand off her mouth long enough to talk* Anyways, Happy New Year to you Yume and CF! Update soon and have lots of fun!!
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 16:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is fantastic! I love it. I'm so glad that you've finally updated. This fic has got to be my favorite. It has everything that i think should be in a story. I hope that you keep up the good work and please give my compliments to your muse! ErehwonDreamer
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Title: I love it!!!!
Reviewed By: RavenCrow16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 19:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your creativity is GRREEEEEEEEAAAAAAAATTTTTTTT!!!!! I love this story...to be honest it was one of the first that I read when I joined mm.org. I hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 18:45 PST
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Inuyasha is sooooooooooooooooooooooo stupid!!!!!!!And I know Sess loves Kagome but it's not only that Inuyasha let her down that she has to get over its the fact that she nearly died!!And as for Kikyou, I'm going to crack open her skull with my keyboard!!! MUHAHAHAH oops sorry my demoness side came out there. Hey CF! If I give you 12 pounds of milk chocolate will you make Yume write faster?? Do we have a deal?
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Title: ^__^!
Reviewed By: Onyx Sapphire On: December 28, 2003 19:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tis as great as i expected it to be...What cant i say except update soon or else..*grabs her monkey and holds a gun to its head* pookie gets it...~.~; ~ Power to all mantally derranged otaku female dragons!!! ~*~ Karina
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 10:34 PST
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oh yeah update soon! PLZ!
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Title: nice fic
Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 10:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i finished the fic yesterday yor fic was so good i read it all in one sitting!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: jeannie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 08:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MIGOD!!!! I just found your fic (thanks to InusDemoness) and you kept me up until 1:30 in the morning, and I have to get up early, too!! But you are writing an awesome fic, tho you keep transposing letters occassionally, and sometimes the sentence structure doesn't quite make sense, it is a very good fic. Wow, now I'm writing run-ons, and a bad one at that! ;D Anyhoo, keep on writing, and I will keep on reading (sorry, no ideas, too tired!). Looking forward to your next chapter!! Good luck in taming your muse!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 19:31 PST
Comment/Review:
ouuuuuuuu ....you good!
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