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Reviewed By: Ata(not signed in) On: December 23, 2003 19:10 PST
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Ahh! I am soooo loving this fic. Even though I feel a *tiny* bit bad for Inu, he really deserves to feel the pain he causes to poor Kagome! And I also love how sweet Sesshy is being... it's good cause it's not all exagerated keep it up! Luv, Ata
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Reviewed By: Priss On: December 23, 2003 12:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... poor Kagome and almost but only almost poor InuYasha. I hope you will really pair Shess/Kag soon... sorry for my grammer I am sic, damn flu
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Reviewed By: Bazingnymph7 On: December 22, 2003 22:54 PST
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what happen to the heart-broken hanyou??? Why cant kikyo just take Naraku to hel with her??? hey, maybe Iy fall for another chick... update soon, the suspense(and curiosity) is killing me!!!
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon(not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 14:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SF: {::glaring at CF::} SWEET JUMPING CHRISTMAS!!!! YOU STOLE ALL THE CANDY CANES?!!! Kagome: CF, how could you? CF: CF only wanted- Inu-chan: You're screwed now buddy. Santa won't bring any presents to bad kids. CF: But CF only wanted to-{::sniffs and starts to cry::} SF: {::hugs CF::} Don't worry. I'm sure if you explain to Santa, he'll understand. CF: Does SF think so? SF: {::nods::} We'll do that in a few minutes. I must speak to Yume-chan. {::smiles as CF walks away::} Sorry for blowing up the kid's head. She's just so cute sometimes. Oh, and has she shown any powers yet? She should be a lighening youkai, like me. Anyway, great chapter as always. I'm so jealous. My 'Trial' chapter turned out like crap and you're writing creme brulee stories! Silver Fox: Like she understood that. SF: Shut up Silver. I'm so sad! I'm leaving for my aunt's Wed. morning! Little Kids for miles around until next Monday. Silver Fox: ARE YOU FOR REAL?! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME?! SF: Moms told you when she told me. So pray for us Yume-chan. We're going to run through Hell. {::pats Silver's back as he starts to cry::} See you when we get back!
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Reviewed By: Fasha Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 11:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope you have a wonderful Holiday. and UPDATE soon cause i LOVE this fic. love the way you make Sesshomaru act. i like the way Inuyasha is like drounding in his own sorrow. sorry i don't like Inu/Kag really don't like Inu that much... anyway i know what writers block is like got that on some of my stories. hope you get over yours.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 11:36 PST
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YAY! Chapter! Wahahaha the plot does indeed thicken! LOVE this story! I can't wait to see Sesshou-kun and Kagome hook up!
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Reviewed By: Vic_18 On: December 22, 2003 11:19 PST
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Another awsome chapter. I was worried about the late chapter but it was long, I love that! I feel like Kikyo isnt done with Inu yet, am I right? And possibly Kagome too, but probably not. Oh well update soon... see ya bye
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 09:52 PST
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The darkside eh? Hehe well I'm still paring Kag and Inu together in mine, so I'm not quite there, but I am open to other possibilites, especially when they are as well written as yours. I just think you've done a really good job of builiding it up. A lot of Sess/Kag fics aren't appealing I guess because they make light of Kagome's feelings before Sessy. But you've made the relationship here very plausible, its easy to see why she would turn to Sesshoumaru. The turn of events you used to make her finally give up on Inu are easy to see happening. And besides you've made the demon Lord very appealing! Hehehe but even from the anime he has that je ne sais quoi Methinks it would be quite easy to find oneself torn between the two brothers if they were real. I'm one of those fans who has always felt that Sesshoumaru isn't as cold underneath as he outwardly projects himself to be. Yea there's something quite mysterious and alluring about Sessy ne? ^-^
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Reviewed By: Sweetapple (not logged in) On: December 22, 2003 07:39 PST
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No problem, glad to help. Awww such a sweet moment between Sess and Kag after he found her in the library. Hmmm now you got me wondering what both Kikyo and Naraku's got planned. Great chapter (that means I see no indication of writer's block anywhere). ^_~
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 07:08 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! You updated thank you Yume! This is still one of my favorite fics. Sesshoumaru: This Sesshoumaru congratulates you on writing such a wonderful fic. I will be looking forward to your next update, and if you don't update soon I will send Jaken to annoy you. Isis: Hehe! He kinda found out that everyone finds Jaken annoying, so he and I actually found some practical use for him. Sesshoumaru: To think after all these years his use is to annoy someone besides me. Isis: If he's so annoying just kill him. Sesshoumaru: Maybe you're right. Jaken! *goes looking for little toad* Isis: Anyway update soon please. We're all waiting for more of that cute and adorable Sessy. ^__^
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Title: kiwi93089
Reviewed By: kiwi93089 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 03:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
errr my stupid computer messed up my other review so i will continue it here Vegeta: he keeps flowers... Me: so what this chapter brang a smile to my face during teh kagome and fluffy part I really liked that ooo makes u wonder who's more evil Kikyo or Naraku Naraku: is that even a question u need an answer to?!?!?! Me: why of course! Gir: hmmm Geta: uh oh the robot's gonna blow it's trying to think! me: well i better go before Gir blows up good chapter keep it up good luck sorry i had to submit to reviews lol but actually it's better for you Naraku: can you believe she asked who was more evil Tell me who do you, human, think is more evil Me: *rolls eyes* *hands huge piles of chocolate to CF and Yume* I'll give more to CF if he helps next time lol lol o yeah singing show tunes... hmm sounds intresting lol peace out merry early christmas! forever hooked Kiwi and friends
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 19:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I had to give it a 10. I'm really a staunch Inu/Kag supporter but you've managed to make Sesshoumaru quite alluring! Hell after reading your story I even dreamt about him! Getting me to dream about him is quite a feat! Hehehe I loooooove the story, I'm such a romantic at heart and ooooh I feel so bad for both Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I'm so rooting for em, eep did I just say that? Well I look forward to the next chapter, keep up the awesome work. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Melshenia On: December 16, 2003 06:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story. but i have to ask you a question. are you a writer, because if i remember correctly then a writer can write at any time. so basically a writer doesn't have writers block it is just an exscuse to not write, so i want you to pick that little brain off your apart for some ideas. so i really hope that you update soon. keep up the good writing. Melshenia Kari Melsheniakari@yahoo.com
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Title: More ASAP!
Reviewed By: Fasha Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 20:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i absolutely love this story please, please, please up date as soon as you can on this story. this is the best story i've read so far. Sessh & Kagome fit so perfectly together. *Puppy dog eyes* please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ejineko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 17:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kawaii....sorry i didn't get back to you until now. other things required my...cough...immediate attention.(looks guilty)(gets squashed by giant shoe of truth...don't know where that came from, just popped out of my head!)^.^'''...heh...gomen! AAAAHHH!!!! sesshoumaru, get your ass BACK in that cage! i'm not done with you yet! Sorry, but making sesshoumaru do the omega dance takes a lotta energy!
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