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Reviewed By: love*anime On: December 12, 2003 21:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give you1,000,000out of 1.Add some lemon and it will be perfect!
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Title: Za Reiken
Reviewed By: Awaikage On: December 11, 2003 23:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter Yume. Please update soon. With my eternal love Awaikage Za Reiken P.S. Are you sure about the offer. Oh yeah here's some more Chocolate Yume.
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Reviewed By: Vic_18 On: December 10, 2003 15:13 PST
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Thanks for the great chapter, keep writing and update soon! Im glad Kagome finally left Inuyasha (in this fic) but it seems that he doesnt intend to just move on. Cant wait to see what happens :)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 17:44 PST
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HELLO! How can you have writer's block when your muse is right there!? Provided she's a little nuts but still!
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Title: More
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 17:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE, I want s'more. Gimmie, gimmie, gimmie. You're torturing me here. When I'm just getting into it, it ends. Come on throw me a bone here. Other than that the story is fantastic, looking forward to more and longer chapters.
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 12:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope you can update soon i really like this fanfic.
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Reviewed By: Katrina aka Striking Falcon On: December 08, 2003 14:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SF: {::pats CF's head::} You're taking your monthly change better than some. Inu-chan: Yeah, she should. She doesn't turn human every new moon. And neither do you if I think about it. SF: That's right Inu-chan. I don't. I become more of the...redheaded persuasion. Anyway, I couldn't get to Chapter 21 because of exams, so this is a two in one review. Chapter 21 made me cry- Inu-chan: Because she's a big wuss. Silver Fox: {::Ignroing Inu-chan::} Yume is the first person to get that kind of reaction. Congrats. SF: Sesshou was so very sweet in that chapter, as he is in this one. I don't exactly know what to do about suggestions, but {::draps an arm over Silver's shoulders::} we'll be more than happy to be your sounding board for any idea you have. Silver Fox: Yeah, we give advice for free. SF: {::smacks Silver upside the head::} That was so egotistical. Silver Fox: I'm shocked you can even spell it. SF: Don't make me zap you water youkai. Oh, these are for you. {::hands over a white toy box with Hershery bars inside::} They should help somewhat with the story. Remember, holler if you need anything!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 13:56 PST
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Poor Kag-chan. She's so heartbroken. :( This is such a good story!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: iram (wackoramaco87) On: December 08, 2003 13:39 PST
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um... yes i think that you did go hard enough for inuyahsa... now you've got me feeling extremly sorry for him! lol! awesome job! this chapter was so sad but kind of happy in a weird way! lol! i can't wait to see wat's coming up next!!! i like the way how you've gradually made sess frm cold hearted arse lord, to a becoming much kinder (sort of) lord, and we can see it through out the story! i hope you get over your writer's block soon and update! p.s. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!
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Reviewed By: Razor Blade Magarita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 12:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK TIME FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER IN... 5...4...3...2...1...0 OR YOU DIEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! yes i will put a curse of the stench of a thousand skunks upon you and your house! and the curse of a thousand plagues upon you and your family!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!... eh he. not really.
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: December 08, 2003 12:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope sesshy heals her heart. dumb inu waiting too long to realize his mistake. love the chapter. thanks for updating.
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Title: Foxflame
Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 10:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah!! Lets get this straight.... i in luv wit this stry... buh im VERY impatient!! pleez hurry n rite!! this is wun of the best stries i eva read.... im dyin 2 c wuh happenz!! n mayb u culd rite more in each chapter...??? ( hopeful thinking)) MuCh LuVv..
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Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: December 08, 2003 03:57 PST
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Sorry for the missing reviews, it had been hell this last month.... But now that I'm back ... Please keep writing!! Your works are great!!! I'll keep my eyes out for the next chapter!! .. (trying to push my little cousin from using the computer... ;_;
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Reviewed By: Sweetapple (not logged in) On: December 07, 2003 22:00 PST
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Hi Youkai Yume! I loved how Sess comforted Kagome in this chapter! As for a suggestion, you may want to do something like having Kagome sing to Rin and Shippo another night as they sleep (with Sess watching), then have Sesshoumaru take Kagome out to a garden. From there you can have Kagome confide in Sess or something. Anyway that was just a suggestion. You're the author, I leave it up to you! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kyana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 20:19 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this chapter. You are just so creative. This story just keeps getting better.
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