| "ForgetMeNot" Reviews/Comments [ 641 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 17:13 PDT
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Here I was, looking forward to seeing him pounce on Tokyo *pouts* I love seeing Kagome seal Inuyasha out of her time. I am most curious about how Sesshoumaru's meeting with Kagome's friends will go.
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Reviewed By: Takaryia On: September 21, 2003 16:31 PDT
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Update. NOW. I AM OBSESSED WITH THIS FIC!! -explodes- -hugs fic. Multiple times- -adds fic address to internet 'favorites' list- If you don't update, I'll... come over there and beat you with a stick!
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 15:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait for the next chapter!!!! I love it so much!!!You are a great writer!! Keep up the good work! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: InuGirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 08:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Next chappies up! I like your story because it fits the title.it has a great pairing and it's fun to read! |
Title: whooho
Reviewed By: White Angel Chi {media miner member} On: September 20, 2003 20:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN DAMN DAMN DAMN this cappie nah this whole story is gr8 i love it ony flaw is WHERES THE LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 17:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i looove your story! hehe! i like the fact that your keeping fluffy in character! he's a little occ but 's all good! i'm listening to the inuyasha soundtrack as i'm reading this... too bad i don't understand any of the words... but going back to the review! awesome job! please update sooner!!! if you do i'll give you a biiiiig cookie!!! ::waving a bigass cookie in front of author's face while the author looks at girl like she's crazy:: hehehehe!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 07:23 PDT
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*snickers* Sesshoumaru...practically begging to be allowed the chance to see Kagome's world. Of course, I don't blame him. If I was a super strong ruthless demon from feudal Japan, I would probably jump at the chance to see modern day Tokyo...especially if I was already IN Tokyo. Sesshoumaru has a lot of curiousities...sure he's not a cat demon? *laughs* Okay, so that wasn't funny ;p |
Reviewed By: TT (Tsukitani) On: September 15, 2003 07:20 PDT
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Sympathy? *looks confused* Why would I write a review out of sympathy? This is a great story! *growls* Do you doubt my word?! I'll have to sic Naraku on you if you do! (He's my personal slave for the week---lost a crazy bet...long story.) NEway, Yay! Sess smiled! I love it when he does that! I go all gooey and drooly and melty when he does. It's kind of frightening, too, but it's all good! ^.~ I had a question...but I don't remember it now! Argh! Damn Sess and his demon sexyness--it's so distracting! Hmm...maybe I'll remember later, ne? Update soon, please? I'll give you a cookie?! *hopeful Shippou eyes* Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Julie 1 On: September 15, 2003 01:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. I wasn't too sure about it and I almost didn't read it. I'm not a big fan of Sesshoumaru and Kagome. The pairing always seems a bit contrived. Inuyasha and Kagome is a much more natural (cannon) choice. I think you are doing an excellent job with this. The situation fits well with in the context of the original story. I think you've got a lot of the characterizations down pretty well. I love Rin. She's just adorable. The dream sequences are very tasty. I hope you'll up the rating in the future. There's a lot of possiblity. Now I can't wait to see how Sessh fits in in Kagome's time. That'll definatly be a laugh. I love how you throw the humor in. I do have to say, I hope Kagome's got stock in the raman market.
Great job! Please post more soon! |
Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Katrina aka. Striking Falcon On: September 14, 2003 23:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
{::Sesshou shakes his head as he watches SF do the happy dance::}
SF:Yay! She updated! She updated! {::dance gets carried away::}
Sesshou: Stop that! You look like a hethen!
SF: I know! {::lets the dance get way out of control::}
Sesshou: I can't believe you could be so vulgar! What would your ancestors say?
SF: Put a little more hip into it? {::giggles as Sesshou walks offstage, then turns to author::} I knew that would work! Anyway, great chapter, as always! You know I love this story,so please update soon! |
Title: queen of the world
Reviewed By: tah-nuh-bee On: September 14, 2003 22:33 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic the best! thanks for the expediant update, it's probably hard with school or whatever. please update again soon!!!!!! ja ne |
Title: YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 21:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I GIVE U A PERFECT 10~~!!!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK FOR THIS AND A BLESSED CURSE. DID I GET THAT RIGHT. I PUT YOU ON MY FAVORITE AUTHORS YOU ARE SOOOOOO GREAT!!!! SESS/KAG FLUFF HEHEHE. THE EVILNESS OF BABOON PELTS *SHUDDER* HEHEHE. UPDATE AGAIN ASAP!!JA NE. |
Reviewed By: Fishfisk On: September 14, 2003 20:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't want to give you ten for everything, because that would not give you an idea of what to or not to fix. However, I found no flaws with your writing style (except for that there's not enough InuYasha. I love him so...) and your grammar and spelling were both nearly flawless, but for a typo or two. It's a fun fanfic to read and overall, I can't imagine it being better.
As for originalit and creativity- well- you got higher marks than a lot of people would, but it's hard to be creative with a fanfic, ne? Especially since so many people are writing them; because the setting and cast are the same, when plots are similar, they tend to look as if they are the same thing over and over.
However, you did a good job, especially with keeping Fluffy as in character as is possible (considering that, well, he needs some emotions for a romance.) I thought you did a quite original twist to it without abandoning Rumiko's genius storyline. Keep up the good work. ^^ |
Reviewed By: youkai_lover On: September 11, 2003 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome and kurama would go nicely with the story plot. |
Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 20:09 PDT
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Very promising fanfic. I like how you slowly develope sess and kag's relationship. Most fanfics just make them fall in love right away. And i love how Sesshoumar mentally argues with himself about Kagome. Only problem that I have: Your chapters are so short! And like 1/4 of your chapters are like replies to your reviews!
Anyways...please update soon! |
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