| "Her Promise, My Sorrow" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 00:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, answers and then awe and praise. The Japanese word for older sister is Anee or Onee. Older brother is Onii or Anii. Maxamillian Pegasus (however it's spelled) is the American version of Pegasus J. Crawford. Romance... is good. Its development would be nice... Now, for praise. This is absolutly wonderful! Exciting! Yay! Keep up the wonderful, excellent, amazing work! I lack enough adjectives to describe the wonderousness of the work! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: sanitys_requiem On: November 06, 2003 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't know if there's a difference between big sister and older sister, but the japanese word for big sister is nee-san
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Reviewed By: sanitys_requiem On: November 06, 2003 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in the cartoon pegasus' name was maximillion pegasus, and i thought his wife was cecilia? is megumi the original japanese or something? whatever,dosen't matter. luv the story, keep up the good writing!
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Reviewed By: Moon of Darkness and Sadness On: October 14, 2003 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Western Female Neko: I really like it very much I hope you place your next chapter soon! Ja ne
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Title: Violet Eyes and Kuribo-kun
Reviewed By: Jenny from the Block [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Violet Eyes: AWWWWW! Poor Pegasus! Kuribo-kun: Yeah, hope he'll see her again. Violet Eyes: This is one of the most emotional fics you've wrote so far and I love the way you write, this fic almost made me cry after I read 'Memories' Kuribo-kun: Also, this coinsides so well with the TV show, I like this alot too! Violet Eyes: Yeah, and me and Kuri-kun hope you continue soon! Kuribo-kun: You had better too, cause now my sister's gone a-crazy. Violet Eyes: Wheeeeeeeeeeee! Hope you write next chappie soon! Wheeeeeeee!
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