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| "Lovely Dangers" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: October 19, 2003 16:01 CDT
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Man, this fic is weird. Kagome getting raped twice, Naraku's spawns, and Inu-yasha worrying. Please explain. Update.
| Reviewed By: dark n light On: September 28, 2003 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay what a great story but i have to say i didnt like kagome getting raped so much...........BUT IT IS A GREAT STORY KEEP WRITING.....you are still updating the one at ff.net right!!!! please update soon!!!!
| Reviewed By: PixieStick On: August 31, 2003 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cracked up when i read wut u wrote to crazyblade XD all i could think was "Girl she told ur ass OFF!" it was so funny! anyways i also didnt really like tha fact that kagome got raped twice...HOWEVER if she hadnt, then tha story wouldnt turn out as great as it did!! so i applaud(sp?) u! update again soon! ^_^
BTW~when does tha inu/kag lemon come in?? ô.o | Title: wow
Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your fic. please continue!! could you email me when you update?? buffy7854@yahoo.com | Reviewed By: 4323423423 On: August 30, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
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dont put authors notes in the main text... Otherwise fairly good... I think the Naraku idea's a little dumb but oh well >.> just update soon! | Reviewed By: Nyasu On: August 30, 2003 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job on this fic. And such. | Reviewed By: beautiful black death angel On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first I do belve that you have quite a story here, but, just one quick note, (in most cases)when a person gets rape (one of my friends did, and it was the worst thing ever), doesn't whant to be near anyone, neither from her friends nor (how the hell you expect her to)the opposite sex, but so far, you manage to write some asome, story, and please take note, that I'm not telling you that it is wrong, 'cause if you're think that way, you got it all wrong, I'm only saying that IN MOST CASES, NOT ALL , just don't change a bit, from it, I like it so far, I have even put you on my favorite author's list, plus I do belive you have a "unico", writers style, 'cause no one, has made, me read, six chapters, in about 20 min, or so, and I do belive I most definitly read your other story, anyway, keep on the good job, and forgive my grammar (I'm so a bad writer), but English, it's not my language.
Ja Ne
NeoQueen AKA the beautiful death angel
P.D. you're have all the reasons to, mm.org, is a lot better host, for writers, it lets you free your mind, and those not, erase your stories, 'cause some kid, read a nc-17, even 'cause you put a big black underline WARNING, that it was rated R, but it was definitly, a NC-17. | Reviewed By: bekkablair On: August 25, 2003 04:18 CDT
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god, I'm too hyper for this early in the morning...maybe it's from staying up all night (really!) reading fanfiction online and manga offline. Hmmmm....I wonder..... | Reviewed By: bekkablair On: August 25, 2003 04:15 CDT
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oh, come on, am I the only person with any true fanfiction enthusiasum that an amazing authoress like you deserves?! COME ON, PEOPLE! GO A LITTLE CRAZY WITH THE CAPS LOCK AND SYMBOLS BAR! IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you for your co-operation. I will now shut up, leave you innocent people alone, and go read my precious fanfics. over and out | Reviewed By: bekkablair On: August 25, 2003 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likey mucho lots! ^______________________^
Translation: I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT actually I still do, seeing as I'm only on Chapter 2
p.s. I adored 'Scented Tears'! MAKE IT LONGER OR I'LL STEAL YOUR FLUFFY PILLOW! i would anyway... heh heh heh...I LOVE FLUFFY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok, I'll shut up now | Reviewed By: Sessy's_lover On: August 24, 2003 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have to say you are very good writer. I love this story too. Keep on writing. Dont forget to update Scented Tears. I'm really enjoying your work. | Reviewed By: Bsasami On: August 24, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed reading your fic. | Reviewed By: mitchie On: August 24, 2003 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think your fanfic was good. i have read others similar to your fanfic but i do enjoy reading it!!!! | Reviewed By: Bluebird On: August 24, 2003 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Another great fic!..but aren't you gonna update Scented Tears? (pleazz) | Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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