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| "Lovely Dangers" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: crimson_darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very good. great story line. And great spelling and Grammar. Keep up the good work!:)
| Reviewed By: bummy On: August 05, 2004 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too horny
| Reviewed By: SexyChicklet17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! that was a great fic!!! you're waaaay better then i could ever hope to be!! (as proof check out my fic: Me, Kagome?!) im totally gonna read scented tears since i LOVE sessy...there was only one problem with your fic: YOU DIDNT FINISH IT!!!!! NOOOOOO! PLEEEEASE!! im begging you pleeeeease update or my life will be ruined!(yes its that good) it is soooo exciting and you just left me hanging!!! ACK!!!please update!! oki cya!! luv, sexychicklet17
| Reviewed By: shotgun_105 On: February 18, 2004 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry to inform you but ur story ain't exactly the best one iv'e heard!you need to change some stuff like for one ur being very damn cruel to kagome! i mean you put her raped twice!shesssh!one time is bad enough!
| Reviewed By: Relix On: January 19, 2004 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, when will you update?
| Reviewed By: watermelon On: December 07, 2003 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i love this fic, you so have to update it soon.....keep up the good stuff....
| Title: Great Fic, but where's the rest?
Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic, and though I'm not very into agnst fics, your seems purpoful and hopeful. SO I have enjoyed it. I just hope there is more coming since you haven't posted in over 2 months
| Reviewed By: Chloe On: October 25, 2003 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wanna know why i gave you a bad rating? well it was ok but not the best story i have read. To tell you the truth it was boring. Just like every other "rape" inuyasha story out there. You need something to "juice" it up.
| Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: October 19, 2003 16:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man, this fic is weird. Kagome getting raped twice, Naraku's spawns, and Inu-yasha worrying. Please explain. Update.
| Reviewed By: dark n light On: September 28, 2003 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay what a great story but i have to say i didnt like kagome getting raped so much...........BUT IT IS A GREAT STORY KEEP WRITING.....you are still updating the one at ff.net right!!!! please update soon!!!!
| Reviewed By: PixieStick On: August 31, 2003 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cracked up when i read wut u wrote to crazyblade XD all i could think was "Girl she told ur ass OFF!" it was so funny! anyways i also didnt really like tha fact that kagome got raped twice...HOWEVER if she hadnt, then tha story wouldnt turn out as great as it did!! so i applaud(sp?) u! update again soon! ^_^
BTW~when does tha inu/kag lemon come in?? ô.o | Title: wow
Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your fic. please continue!! could you email me when you update?? buffy7854@yahoo.com | Reviewed By: 4323423423 On: August 30, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
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dont put authors notes in the main text... Otherwise fairly good... I think the Naraku idea's a little dumb but oh well >.> just update soon! | Reviewed By: Nyasu On: August 30, 2003 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job on this fic. And such. | Reviewed By: beautiful black death angel On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first I do belve that you have quite a story here, but, just one quick note, (in most cases)when a person gets rape (one of my friends did, and it was the worst thing ever), doesn't whant to be near anyone, neither from her friends nor (how the hell you expect her to)the opposite sex, but so far, you manage to write some asome, story, and please take note, that I'm not telling you that it is wrong, 'cause if you're think that way, you got it all wrong, I'm only saying that IN MOST CASES, NOT ALL , just don't change a bit, from it, I like it so far, I have even put you on my favorite author's list, plus I do belive you have a "unico", writers style, 'cause no one, has made, me read, six chapters, in about 20 min, or so, and I do belive I most definitly read your other story, anyway, keep on the good job, and forgive my grammar (I'm so a bad writer), but English, it's not my language.
Ja Ne
NeoQueen AKA the beautiful death angel
P.D. you're have all the reasons to, mm.org, is a lot better host, for writers, it lets you free your mind, and those not, erase your stories, 'cause some kid, read a nc-17, even 'cause you put a big black underline WARNING, that it was rated R, but it was definitly, a NC-17. | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
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