| "Tram's Day Out" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: PiccoloLover #? On: March 15, 2004 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed your stories with Piccolo and Tram. (Then again, I love Piccolo, so any story about him is good!) It would be great if you could write another story about them... maybe as to what happens at the end of Super Namek. (Do they have a child???) Keep writing, please!
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Reviewed By: Khandy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job! I like it. Personally i was never a fan of Piccolo, but he does have his moments. I can't wait to read the rest of your sequel. I love what you showed me on message. Hot stuff honey!
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Title: Professional Concubine
Reviewed By: Mehla On: November 26, 2003 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story line with Tram and Piccolo. I was a big fan of you on fanfiction.net but it seems you aren't there anymore. I thought that you no longer wrote theses great stories anymore ^_^. I happy to see that I was wrong. I love your writing style. The only thing I have to really gripe about is the spelling of Kami's name. You have it as Kame. It's hard for me to not think turtle instead of god when I saw it written like that. But that and that stories occasionaly end with half a word O_o. But that aside I love your work. I'm highly addicted to it and can't wait to see the next part. Hope thy have a cute kid ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. I'm glad to see that you are going to write a sequal to Supernamek I really liked that one. No one writes fic that center around Piccolo. I'm glad that you did. I would like to see the sequal to this fic about the pictures maybe instead of a small snake wrapped around Picco's neck you can put in a big snake(ie boa constrictor) wrapped around Picco's .... Well what ever you decide. Once again great fic. |
