| "Girl Trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 23:10 EST
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(raises an eyebrow before pulling out her flame thrower) HOW DARE YOU YAMI! YOU STUPID PHARAOH PICK ON LITTLE YUGI! (begins to burn Yami before pulling a mallet and continously smacking the damn pharaoh over the head) How dare you Seto! Trying to molest little Yugi! (starts attacking seto too before she goes attack the other guys in this ficcy that had nasty thoughts on Yugi) Mokuba: Are you going to kill everyone? (thinks for a sec) Maybe, STUPID PERVERTED POWER CRAZED MEN! (goes on attacking the group she was attacking before) Noa" (smirks) I'll decipher this message, "She likes this story but she hates how Yugi is treated, but never the less continue writing the story because she wants to see Yugi kick ass" Clear enough? SHI NE SHI NE SHI NE!!! (starts flailing a katana at the perverted men) Mokuba: (sighs) It's going to be a long night.
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Reviewed By: Ashi Taiyouno On: November 20, 2003 13:38 EST
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W-wait a second....where's the rest of it?!?!? I wanna read more!
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Reviewed By: wait, what On: November 19, 2003 22:23 EST
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you're going to leave me at a cliffie, i've been waiting all this time for yami to pay attention to yugi and you leave me there? oh I am NOT a happy reader, so you're are just going to have to update pronto.
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Reviewed By: Pharaoh's High Priestess On: November 10, 2003 11:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*WOW!!!* Is all I can say...I like this story...I like it a *lot*Your characterization of Yami is really unique-and I love it! I'm not really surprised he's a control freak(He was a Pharaoh!) I can't wait to see the rest of this....Great job!
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Reviewed By: Strega On: November 09, 2003 07:17 EST
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I've tried to ignore all the 'Yugi is a Girl' theme stories. But I got tricked by the summary and didn't suspect. Your story is rather good.(Only complaint is the flash backs are hard to separate from the current - or maybe I was reading this too early in the morning.) Your Yami's character is one of the most original I've seen. I find it unlikely that Yami would immediately be a well adjusted teen who fits perfectly into our modern day society. (I think it completely believable that Yami would be a controlling, possessive, demanding partner- He was Pharaoh, after all)The relationship with Yugi couldn't be more dysfunctional, even when Yugi wasn't a girl But it's sure gun to read. On the other hand, I HATE YAMI! I HATE HIM! WHY THE HELL DOES YUGI LIKE HIM? That Controlling, self centered, egotistical, unappreciative, insensitive Bastard! How dare he try to control Yugi! How dare he think he owns Yugi! Ah! He must pay! (Sorry...I guess I got overly excited....) Any way, I'd really like to read more but I wouldn't exactly sniffle if Yami got his butt kicked or Yugi got fed up with the ancient pain-in-the-butt spirit and left him! :) Please keep writing. Your story telling is skillful and highly entertaining.
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Reviewed By: Yami to Yugi no Miko On: October 20, 2003 17:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crying hysterically* What a great story! I can't believe what a jerk Yami-sama is being.....Will Yugi-sama leave home? Will Yami-sama go after him? It seems Yami-sama is a woman hater in this fic...Will we see more of the demented angel? Can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!
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Reviewed By: Stella-chan On: October 15, 2003 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I *love* this fic! I can't believe this is your first Yugioh fic...this story is so well written....you can actually *feel* the pain Yami and Yugi are going through....*sob* But please, don't leave Yugi hanging like that...I want my kawaii Yugi-chan back! Great story....can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 18, 2003 18:17 EDT
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Yami really is a sod - good chapter more please |
Reviewed By: Wait, what/ On: September 15, 2003 21:26 EDT
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Ok this was great, I loved it, but did that girl turn yugi into a girl or is it something else. If it is something else then I'm totally lost. If she did turn yugi into a girl, then I think that is great the way you kept the suspense going until the end. Great Story, update. |
Reviewed By: Yami no Katya On: September 15, 2003 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Jesus...
You never said until the end, and it wasn't easy to guess until I re-read some...oh JESUS...
You've got my mouth hanging open and I can't seem to talk coherently yet.
Holy GOD! Poor Yugi! And....EFFING HELL, YAMI, YOU CAN'T LEAVE HIM LIKE THAT!!!! HOLY MOTHER OF GOD!!! YUGI NEEDS HIM THE MOST AND HE *LEAVES*?!
Oh my lord...what a chapter.
What. A. Chapter.
Amazing, well-written, and so suspenseful, my neck hurts from leaning forward too much.
PLLEEEEAASE continue soon!!! |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 15, 2003 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what did she do???????? i must know update soon please this is getting intresting |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo2 On: September 15, 2003 15:41 EDT
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A very heart-wrenching story, so far. Poor Yugi!
You've left off the final "t" in thought, through-out, spelling it "though", though. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Youko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooooooooo Cool! Are you going to update soon? I sure as hell hope so. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: YamiMeko On: August 31, 2003 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a dam good fic!! Write more soon please! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On:
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That was good, write some more |
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