| "Girl Trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Title: Girl Trouble
Reviewed By: MistressSayu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2010 14:46 EST
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I love this story! Update please! Hey, can Yugi end up getting pregnant? |
Title: Girl Trouble
Reviewed By: MistressSayu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2010 07:24 EDT
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I love this story and I love how possessive Yami is over Yugi, please update!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 20:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! Please update this soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: cool you updated
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 22:32 EST
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Cool you updated. Ryou very interesting twist the story very interesting indeed. Whether he's making it up or its the truth I guess I'll just have to wait lol. Can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: darkladyknight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 18:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. I am also excited about reading more. I just love yuugi and yami, and not to fond of Jin. He makes me angry, but i guess you need a obessed person to make the plot. anyways great story, very original, can't wait for more.
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Title: EXTREMELY WELL DONE!
Reviewed By: Dark Angel 666 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 17:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
God! THis is EXTREMELY well writton. I've read very few fics that I can say EXTREMELY to. God...good transition and the controling area...wow...I must say you are a skilled writer and do go on with your stories. I'm only on chapter two and......wow. This is a materful well written story and keep up the good work. God...oh Ra dammit! Nice job! Although your grammer and spelling could use a few lift ups but that even happenes to me. Very few people do fics when the characters change sex. I like that idea. Who knows...maybe trying to one wouldn't hurt. Ja ne.
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Title: This story rocks!!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I'm so glad you updated. Poor Yugi having to go through his first period, well now he knows that it really does *hurt* lol, and I liked the whole being feverish thing too, very realistic lol actually I feel even more sorry for Yami. I hope they find the girl who did that to Yugi, so Yugi can be changed back. Though Yugi does make a pretty girl, he's just better as a pretty boy. Great job please keep onf writing. Ra I think this has gotten to be the longest review I've written.
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! ^___^ Though, Yami is kinda an ass but I don't care ^^ At least he still loves Yuugi and all... And he's hot XD. Please update this really really really soon! Please don't leave us all hanging! Update this soon! I also added this fic to my faves ^_^
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Reviewed By: Pharaoh's High Priestess On: May 19, 2004 20:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sean-san...where are you!!???Please continue the story!!!I can't stand the waiting!!!Even if it's just a teaser!!!
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Reviewed By: /Strega On: May 16, 2004 19:17 EDT
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Damn, you haven't updated in a while. At least have one more chapter and have them all end up happily or whatever. The story is just too interesting to leave floating forever in unfinished land. :( You owe it to Yugi! Look at all you put him through and now you just abandon him (Cries) Oh, and by the way....I still HATE YAMI! HATE HIM! HATE HIM! May Ma'at feed his heart to the Amemait!
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Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 12:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
While you have a few spelling/grammar glitches (and the formatting for italics seems messed up -- though I doubt that's your fault), this is a fascinating, involving story to read. Yugi's dilemna is heartbreaking (and I keep wanting to thump Yami for being suck a prick, though I do understand *why* he's acting like that, thanks to your excellent characterization -- even if it's one we don't normally see in fic). I'm intrigued by the little hints being dropped here and there: the nausea, the sudden attraction to other men... Your villain is truly evil, isn't she? Looking forward to finding out more about her -- and to reading more of this story. Here's hoping Yami will eventually get his act together and help Yugi, instead of making things worse for him all the time!
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Reviewed By: Sugarpie_Honeybunch On: April 01, 2004 17:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: /Strega On: February 29, 2004 17:50 EST
Comment/Review:
So glad you updated! I added you to my favorites. Last chapter was nice....but I STILL HOLD A GRUDGE AGAINTS YAMI! Anyway, still love the story. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Pharaoh's High Priestess On: February 08, 2004 15:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot DAMNN!!!!Is about all I can say, for now! I *totally* love this story!!! Yes, Yami-sama is a foul mouthed, possessive, crazy, control freak...But what did one expect for a Pharaoh that pretty much decimated his entire family?! It was the way things were done in monarchies...If you wanted to keep anything that belonged to you, you pretty much had to kill all interlopers. Heck even Queen Elizabeth I of England did it...But anyway, I love how you're handling this story, and as much as a jerk my Pharaoh is being, I hope he and Yugi work it out...I like Jin, but Yami-sama will kill him if he doesn't back off from Yugi...and I do hope Bakura gets to hold his own, even if he does eventually get his ass kicked...I want more!!!!Chapters of the story, that is....Great job!
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Reviewed By: Mekalunia On: December 28, 2003 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>=O I hate You Yami!!! IIIIIIIII HHAAAAAAATEEEEEEEEEE YOOOUUUUU!!!!!!!!!! Eheheh...sorry Sean-san ^^;;; but...;O; You are a bad person to make Yugi-chan suffer like that. You have to uptade this soon!!
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