| "Hidden Love Revealed" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you meant mine not mines. Good story though! TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: TechnicalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read the first chapter on ff.net like two weeks ago but for some reason i can't go to the second chapter when i click on the arrow, so i'm glad that you have the story here. great. please update.
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Title: Dark Angel 101
Reviewed By: Dark Angel 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic. ppppplllllleeeeeeaaaassssssssseeee donot do it Marik/Bakura i really prefer for Bakura to be with Ryou and for Marik to be with Malik so please dont do it the other way around and try to update ASAP ^_^ *_-
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Reviewed By: Sharon MacKinnon On: December 05, 2003 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When is it going to be Yami/Yugi pairing? Update soon on that! Pwease?^^
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Reviewed By: at On: November 20, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when will you update chapter 7 like you did on fanfiction you said it would be ownle a few days
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Reviewed By: erika On: October 28, 2003 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its GREAT! Please Update Soon.
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Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 17:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mee again... i was reading deh other reviews fuh dis fic n... SCREW WAT ALL DEM OTHER BUMS SAY ABOUT NOT DOIN THE B/M LEMON! THEY STUPID N AINT GOT NO TASTE, let alone any creativity... lol i jus dissed a lot off ppl... sry X.X
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Title: Deme
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 17:42 CDT
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OY! I'll say go for the Bakura/Marik thingie in later chapters... but for now, continue with the other pairings... IMA A HENTAI FREAK, GIMMIE YAOI! LMFAO First, B/R, M/M, J/S, and Y/Y, after then you can du the B/M OKIE! tankie XD i talk to much
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Reviewed By: Sango Taijiya On: October 20, 2003 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue!!! as for the pairing, do some Y/Y and please don't do Marik/Bakura!! Update!
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 20:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
P.S. People don't want a Marik/Bakura cause they want a Bakura/Ryou. Well, this is fiction, so I don't see why you can't have both! ^^;
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 20:08 CDT
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Very nice chappie! I'm glad that Bakura seems to care about Ryou (Marik seems less able to control himself) I like a lemon, but it's up to you, of course. I will be patiently waiting for the Marik/Bakura! Update soon! ^_^
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Title: I'm insane!
Reviewed By: Raikny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm insane!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Neko On: October 08, 2003 18:45 CDT
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Iiiieeeee!! Don't you dare have a B/M pairing! Bakura and Ryou, all the way baby!!! B/R B/R B/R B/R B/R *does strange dance around fire while chanting* Okie dokities, that's my vote! Nyan! Chibi Neko >^.^
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Reviewed By: Zinx On: October 07, 2003 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooooooo.........!!!!!!!!!!!!! That can't be it . Thats all you wrote ? No fair how come you always leave us with the cliff hangers ? Errr.. another question , how come the slave traders always starts off with "well well well what do we have here " if I'm annoying please tell me so next time update . kaite kudasai.arigoto for reading my questions.
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Reviewed By: DarkCutie On: October 07, 2003 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO NO Please Not Bakura And Marik.Ryou and Bakura go so good together Im begging you.Please Please Please Please Please.If you do I'll give you a hug.I love it so far.Please No Bakura and Marik.((Gives Puppy Eyes))Your a great writer and I love your fics.
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