| "Tales of a Ronin" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: killerman83ca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Kitchen sink. You were making me laugh my head off about that. So please make the robot or someone throw the Kitchen sink at him again
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Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 04:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, and i mean wow. This is quite entertaining and makes me want to read the next chapter really badly. But i have kinda run in to an obstacle on my quest to do so...ya see, there seems to be no other chapter... And thats not very fair seeing as you have such a good story going. With that said, I hope to see another chapter soon. Please continue the good work. - Chaos Damn It
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Smokey McLockpicker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice useage of kitchen sink. Needs to blow up Keitaro more often but overall a very good story. Question: Is Mari a replacement for Sarah or just a new character? Can't wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: Jili-chan On: April 24, 2004 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story so is harukas kid seta's too
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Reviewed By: S.M. On: December 01, 2003 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait to read more,please update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: DigitalAvatar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a very solid fic, and looking great so far. It will be interesting to see how this story develops with Akamatsu-san's original character designs as a base. Fantastic idea, and keep up with the great writing!
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Title: Keep it up
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Stiz, I like the two chapters so far. Just a really few spots are a little dull, but that's nothing major. I like the style of the writin' and very good grammar. Just some here and there could use a bit of fixing. I love the dialoug between characters and Keitaro's thinkings. Keep it up! ^_^ |
