| "Wonderful Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: KuramaRose On: June 01, 2004 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Dreams do need to come true!
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Reviewed By: Youko Kara On: December 06, 2003 05:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great!!! Oh please please please write a sequal! Dreams have to come true please please please!!
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Reviewed By: jo jo On: October 10, 2003 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was sooooo good!!!! write a sequel please!!!! make the sequel MORE leomony!!! *sighs* sorry, i have a dirty mind. ~JO JO~
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Reviewed By: Mistress of the Sword [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love dreams! Yay! Ok You need to write about how he makes 'em come true. Go! Go and be writing! er, or whatever...
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 11:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it! A dream! Kawaii!! The kitsune does have some rather ... vivid? dreams about his firebaby ^_~
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Reviewed By: Ko-chan On: September 07, 2003 04:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've never read a yaoi lemon before O.O I'm not saying I loved it but it was better than I thought one would be. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude, that was incredibly cool! Awwwzers ! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: miakichan On: September 04, 2003 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go for the sequel. Very good story. never knew it was a dream until the end. |
Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. In one word, Yummy. It gave me a warm tingly feeling I get when I read Kurama/Hiei fics. Please write more. I know that it's supposed to be a one-shot but if it becomes a story it has a lot of potential. If Hiei or Kurama have dreams like that one Kurama just had then it's gonna be really good. |
Reviewed By: mocha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow, your lemons keep getting better and better! i'm not sure about a sequel. writing one may take a few chapters and end up as a full story. but you could also do that too; it'd be fun to write. nice job!
~always cocoa, mocha |
Reviewed By: darkblaze On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no idea it was an actual dream till the end i am so horrible anyway i believe you should write more |
