| "Inner Struggles" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: pretty good
Reviewed By: paniwi (to lazy to log in) On: February 01, 2005 13:31 CST
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Heya there, I just read your ficcie for the first time and I think it's pretty good. There's good angst and a lot of comedy that had me laughing my ass of. You made alot of seemingly unimportant characters important, I like that, it's good story twist. Though I think you oughta try to mix the angst and the comedy a bit more. You jump from comedy to angst a little to fast. About the lemon. The thoughts were good but it should be more in depth. You should do more with the eeehm, pelvic area of the male species *blushes tomato-red* Oh and, you really should put hentai in the genres, it is a hentai story now ye know plz update soon *looks up*, OMG, this must be like the longest review i've ever written!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aya H On: March 27, 2004 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! You have to add more! Don't leave me out on a cliff!!! You left me on a cliff with the Joey/Seto thing too!! AAARRGHH!! A giant mob will find you if you don't write more!!! Email me Chaotik_Killer@yahoo.com if you get a chance! bai bai!
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Reviewed By: ryou lover On: March 15, 2004 04:38 CST
Comment/Review:
you evil person from friken hell dont right clifys! ps:i will win ryou
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Reviewed By: eyes0nme19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 12:44 CST
Comment/Review:
It's really good. Hope you update soon. Looking forward to reading more...
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Reviewed By: Samantha J.C On: December 29, 2003 01:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome! you have go to continue this. oh and as for the lemon um... I think it should be between Ryou and Bakura..that is after Bakura gets out of the hospitol of corce
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Title: Cute
Reviewed By: Camille On: November 30, 2003 23:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the comment "Who fucked the rest of your face?" I would have never came up with that! HAHAHAH!! This story is good. I want to know what happens with Bakura. I also want to know if Joey and Kaiba get involved.
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Reviewed By: Alli Hearts On: November 30, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
took ya long enough. well anyway Seto and Joey are finally hitting it off. ^.~ Just don't kill Baku-Chan or like mortally wound him, okay? Had funn reading, hope to read more soon ~~~~~~~~~~~~XxAllisonxX
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Reviewed By: Alli Hearts On: October 07, 2003 05:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww ryou is all sad. lets hope bakura isn't hurt too much.
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Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE. AND PLZ DON"T MAKE THIS LIKE A JOEY/BAKURAFIC CAUSE I'LL HUNT YOU DON'T AND HURT YOU!!! >=)( |
