| "Blessed Curse" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: hColleen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 13:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I very much enjoy your writing style. It's hard to believe you are only 15. You have a very mature style. I very much enjoyed Forget-Me-Not, as well. I hope all goes well with school and that CF doesn't drive you too nutty :D By the bye, it's=it is, its=possesive form (no appostrophy), and spell check :p although, I think most people are used to reading over typos. Good luck with your hopes of being a writer/artist (by the bye, I enjoyed your pictures, too) hColleen
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Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 07:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it please update soon
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Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 14:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hello, and congratulations on getting out another chapter ^_^. You're my fav. InuYasha writer and have read or am on my way to reading the rest of your fics. Don't worry about taking too long to update, just make sure you get the next chapter out soon 'k? Your storyline's going along great, and you have an awesome writing talent. Good luck in your soon-to-be manga ^_^ ~Lain
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Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha. I'm curious, have you read Demon Diaries? Because that last part of this chapter was almost exactly the same from a scene in one of the books. Oh well great story so far.
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: Corin & Koda &Karin On: August 05, 2004 15:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Corin: Yay!!!!! You updated!!! *smiles* Koda(my muse): speaking of updating....*looks over at where Corin was to see Karin standing there in front of Corin* Karin(my other muse): What do you want pansy?Koda: I AM NOT A FLOWER!!!! AND I WANT CORIN TO UPDATE HER STORIES!!!! Karin: *smirks* She doesn't have to. Koda: And why is that? Karin: She's moving, so she has to pack and doesn't have time to update her stories. Koda:but she has time to read fanfics? Karin: no one said she was perfect. Koda: *pouts* Corin: *hugs Karin* Thank you! Karin: Don't mention it...but you do own me some pocky now. Corin: ._. Karin: ^_^ Please update your story...we love it alot...
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: Corin & Koda &Karin On: August 05, 2004 15:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!!! You updated!!! *smiles* speaking of updating....*looks over at where Corin was to see Karin standing there in front of Corin* What do you want pansy? I AM NOT A FLOWER!!!! AND I WANT CORIN TO UPDATE HER STORIES!!!! *smirks* She doesn't have to. And why is that? She's moving, so she has to pack and doesn't have time to update her stories. but she has time to read fanfics? no one said she was perfect. *pouts* *hugs Karin* Thank you! Don't mention it...but you do own me some pocky now. ._. ^_^ Please update your story...we love it alot...
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: Corin & Koda On: August 05, 2004 15:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!!! You updated!!! *smiles* speaking of updating....*looks over at where Corin was to see Karin standing there in front of Corin* What do you want pansy? I AM NOT A FLOWER!!!! AND I WANT CORIN TO UPDATE HER STORIES!!!! *smirks* She doesn't have to. And why is that? She's moving, so she has to pack and doesn't have time to update her stories. but she has time to read fanfics? no one said she was perfect. *pouts* *hugs Karin* Thank you! Don't mention it...but you do own me some pocky now. ._. ^_^ Please update your story...we love it alot...
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: DarkPyroPlanet On: August 04, 2004 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*in a sing song voice* The dancing part is coming up, doo da, doo da, the dancing part is coming up, ooo doo da day...yay! *clears voices* Yay! Jme is liking this story more and more and more, even though she liked it a WHOLE LOT before, heehee. There were one or two grammatical errors here and there, but nothing really noticable. And you know what? I absolutly love the way you made the love so slow and natural. His temtations to kiss her, heehee, and the caring, nurturing way he is treating her, its all so sweet!! I also really liked the 'romp in the snow' thingamabob, very kawaii. I'm sooooo looking forward to the next chapter. It better be long, romantic, and FLUFFY!!! MWUAHAHAHA!!! *chucks a humungoid handful of chocolate flavored hamsters...or is it hamster flavored chocolates? eh...not sure...at CF* *says in a whisper, kinda mob boss ish* You, do this fo' me, and there'all be moore chocos whare those came from, ya know wat I means? Capische? Heh, you gooot it. *< was purposly spelt funky, you know, mob boss ish, heehee* Anyway, I absolutly love this story, you, and you others. Love and pickles for all!!! Yay! *confetti and balloons fall from sky* Now, you update soon, and you won't get *coughducktapedtoachairandthentickledcontinuouslybyfluffywittlehamstersand/ orcough* harmed. *innocent look* What? I had a lil' coughing fit, no big. *giggles* Anyway, I'm running out of my 1500 characters here, so I gots ter get. Til' next time, Arigato and sayonara for now! ^_^ ~Jme~
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 18:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww! That has to be oen of the sweetest chapters I have ever read! I just love Sesshou/Kagome pairings! And you do them so well, I loved the chapter and I hope you update soon, because I have been checking almost veryday to see if this was updtaed and now it is and already can't wait until you update again! Great job!
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Title: KAWAII
Reviewed By: maiwolfblossom On: August 02, 2004 17:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWW!!!! Sessho is in LOVIE!!! WEEEEHEEEEEEE!!!! *checks end of chapter once more* AWWWWW HE GAVE HER A _TENDER_ LOOK! THE LOOK OF SWEET SWEET TENDER LOVIE!!!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! Update soon!
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Title: Sesshou in Love
Reviewed By: BelleDayNight (not signed in) On: August 02, 2004 16:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thats so sweet that Sesshou is falling in love! He was blushing and everything! I don't think it will take much effort on Kagome's part to fall for our favorite demon lord. =) You did another amazing job! I love your Sesshou/Gome stories! They make me happy! BelleDayNight
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Reviewed By: animegrl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 19:50 PDT
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I've been reading this fanfic for so long!! I am so glad you've updated!!
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Reviewed By: heninu1111 On: July 31, 2004 16:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv the story please update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Yume On: July 31, 2004 16:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Adorable.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 16:05 PDT
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Kawaii. Love the story. Keep up the great work. What is Inu and his group and Naraku doing? What is Naraku waiting for? What is he going to cause that will make Kagome run to Inu Yasha? Why is Inu following Naraku? Is Kikyou really dead? Did Kagome grab the shards from the henya youkai that Sess killed? Lots of questions, waiting for the answers. I do love the story. Keep up the great work.
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