| "Blessed Curse" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Title: 28 days
Reviewed By: jesslist On: November 22, 2003 14:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you that cause trust me i loved it!!!!!!! i wish you put more chapters to your story!
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Title: blessed cures
Reviewed By: jesslist On: November 22, 2003 14:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
well the writing was good and the spelling, but my enjoyment was not pleased, and your creativity(or so you say) sucked. For god! you used a movie for you sucky story!
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Title: Za Reiken
Reviewed By: Awaikage On: November 19, 2003 01:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read both Blessed Curse and Napea's Mesmerize Me. Hmmmm In my opinion Blessed Curse is better so far. And juste whom is it that flamed you, I wounder if I should unleash my Kanbou Mouka on them for the insult. Not to mention the closed minded idiocy. Well another great story Yume. In my opinion better then Napea's. Hmmmmmm I already said that. Awaikage Za Reiken P.S. Sorry Yume my chocolate is all gone these three cakes will just have to do.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: sessslave6 On: November 14, 2003 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol its just like the movie. i love it!!!!!!!!! its so adorable i cant wait till the next update!!! yay!!! im just sad there was no dancing silverware ::smiles:: well i still think it was so cute u based it on one of my favorite movies! im also glad u used sess-chan instead of inuyasha ::makes nasty face:: not that i dont like him its just sess-chan is so much cooler!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 09:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon please i love it i want to know what happens next please
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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 01:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny! it's like i'm watching beuaty & the beast(whick is one of my fav disney movies). i'm just kinda dissapointed there was no dancing silverware. But that would have been real weird major. good story.Ja Ne! -Lindsey^_^ ~~~~~~~~~~~ wow. that's creepy. at the same time of reading this, i'm watching the movie in my my head. saying quotes from the movie that always just happen to be the exact same as what you write. what do know. that's kinda sad that i know almost exactly what is going to happen. Ja Ne. -Linze-_- ~~~~~~~~~ (If you can't tell, Linze is the evil one. i think she is sick though. did you read what she wrote?! either she really really really likes the story[It IS super funny!], or she is super super major sick. and Linze doesn't get sick.)
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 15:49 PST
Comment/Review:
ouu!!!! awesome awesome awesome chappie!!! lol! i'm REALLY REALLY REALLY glad ur taking ur time with sess and kag and not having them together in like the first couple of chappies... those ficcies crack me up! lol! but i'm confused on one thing... so sesshie's dad's fang was broken off and now sesshie going to put his own fang in and give it to his mate...? p.s. random question but do u know if they're still selling beauty and the beast (disney version) in the stores or are they going to sell them again like 10 years later?
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Reviewed By: KatrinaXaten On: November 09, 2003 14:51 PST
Comment/Review:
Aww, come now, your chapters are lovely! Mucho charactero developemento.
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 17:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SF: I so don't understand why you hate all of your chapters. I think you're a perfectionist, and I somehow need to come through your computer and slap you. Silver Fox: I don't think that will convince her to update. SF: You might have a point there. Oh well then. I won't threaten her. But she'd better update soon, because I'm looking forward to her being busted.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 09:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please update soon : )
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 19:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please update soon
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Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 18:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore Beauty and the Beast! (You may be able to tell by my pen name) This is great! It makes me want to watch my Disney version except replace the characters. I should read further...who's Gaston? Naraku! Hmm...maybe not....great job though!!
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 05:25 PST
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*giggling madly* Sess practicing his smile...too funny! I love how you had him categorically refuse to try. Very in character. Had me in stitches imagining him glowering and glaring and all the other "gl" things he does. So, no surprises now, okay? On to the singing and dancing tableware, right? *snicker*
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Reviewed By: Mistress Fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 14:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I am suprised at how you are bringing SesshoMaru's emotions out. I mean some times people over do it and I am just like "Liek he woudl say THAT!" But with this I could actually see him lose his temper like that. I am reading Neapes' fic and it does have better parts then yours but yours has better parts then hers. So in other words your fic is equal to her fic. I love this chapter. Cannnot wait for the chap! Oh and could you read my fic that's called Past Becomes' Present? It is at MM and Killing Perfection, if you are going to read it. I would be most happy!
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Reviewed By: Western Female Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 14:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you story and I really, REALLY hope you update soon. BTW please read one of my stories? You don't have to though. Anyway great story. Ja
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