| "Blessed Curse" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fenikkusu Ice (previously known as Sweetapple) not logged on On: December 27, 2003 23:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time I reviewed as my new pen name, Fenikkusu Ice! (I was Sweetapple). It's better this way coz then I don't hafta use three different pen names. I wanna delete my old pen name because I probably won't use it anymore but I don't think you can do that on this site. Whoops sorry, I'm just rambling again. Anyway I remember watching the Disney version of Beauty and the Beast and I think you fitted the characters from Inuyasha quite well. Great chapter! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: bloodroseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 15:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooOOOooo...update soon!! I can't take the suspense and I wanna read the rest of the story!! It's really good and I love it!! Update soon please!! :D
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Title: Za Reiken
Reviewed By: Awaikage On: December 03, 2003 16:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter Yume. And of course I would kill your flamers for you. Well anyway I'll write next update. With my eternal love Awaikage Za Reiken P.S. More chocolate Yume. Oh and its not for you CF. And just so you now I can unleash my Kanbou Mouka without killing but it does hurt CF. Just a warning. No threat intended.
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 12:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SF: I'm so glad CF-chan is working out for you. My Little Muse quit on me. Silver Fox: Yeah. It would be funny if I didn't have to do her job. SF: I know. So all of the stories now are going to have a touch of hentai to them. {::starts to cry::} I don't want all the stories to have hentai in them! Silver Fox: And I don't want to think of anything other than sex, but you don't hear me whining! Speaking of exams, don't you have a five-pager on the history of Rome and it's deities? SF: Oh shit! {::dashes offstage::} Silver Fox: I knew that would get her going! We've got to go! Good luck on your exams. Oh, and the desire to be slapped is...questionable, to say the least.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 06:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you beauty and the beast inuyasha style please update soon
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Reviewed By: Kyana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 19:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this and I love it. It's much better than the other B&B fic. Please keep working. Of course, how are you going to manage three at once?????
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Title: 28 days
Reviewed By: jesslist On: November 22, 2003 14:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you that cause trust me i loved it!!!!!!! i wish you put more chapters to your story!
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Title: blessed cures
Reviewed By: jesslist On: November 22, 2003 14:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
well the writing was good and the spelling, but my enjoyment was not pleased, and your creativity(or so you say) sucked. For god! you used a movie for you sucky story!
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Title: Za Reiken
Reviewed By: Awaikage On: November 19, 2003 01:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read both Blessed Curse and Napea's Mesmerize Me. Hmmmm In my opinion Blessed Curse is better so far. And juste whom is it that flamed you, I wounder if I should unleash my Kanbou Mouka on them for the insult. Not to mention the closed minded idiocy. Well another great story Yume. In my opinion better then Napea's. Hmmmmmm I already said that. Awaikage Za Reiken P.S. Sorry Yume my chocolate is all gone these three cakes will just have to do.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: sessslave6 On: November 14, 2003 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol its just like the movie. i love it!!!!!!!!! its so adorable i cant wait till the next update!!! yay!!! im just sad there was no dancing silverware ::smiles:: well i still think it was so cute u based it on one of my favorite movies! im also glad u used sess-chan instead of inuyasha ::makes nasty face:: not that i dont like him its just sess-chan is so much cooler!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 09:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon please i love it i want to know what happens next please
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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 01:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny! it's like i'm watching beuaty & the beast(whick is one of my fav disney movies). i'm just kinda dissapointed there was no dancing silverware. But that would have been real weird major. good story.Ja Ne! -Lindsey^_^ ~~~~~~~~~~~ wow. that's creepy. at the same time of reading this, i'm watching the movie in my my head. saying quotes from the movie that always just happen to be the exact same as what you write. what do know. that's kinda sad that i know almost exactly what is going to happen. Ja Ne. -Linze-_- ~~~~~~~~~ (If you can't tell, Linze is the evil one. i think she is sick though. did you read what she wrote?! either she really really really likes the story[It IS super funny!], or she is super super major sick. and Linze doesn't get sick.)
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 15:49 PST
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ouu!!!! awesome awesome awesome chappie!!! lol! i'm REALLY REALLY REALLY glad ur taking ur time with sess and kag and not having them together in like the first couple of chappies... those ficcies crack me up! lol! but i'm confused on one thing... so sesshie's dad's fang was broken off and now sesshie going to put his own fang in and give it to his mate...? p.s. random question but do u know if they're still selling beauty and the beast (disney version) in the stores or are they going to sell them again like 10 years later?
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Reviewed By: KatrinaXaten On: November 09, 2003 14:51 PST
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Aww, come now, your chapters are lovely! Mucho charactero developemento.
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 17:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SF: I so don't understand why you hate all of your chapters. I think you're a perfectionist, and I somehow need to come through your computer and slap you. Silver Fox: I don't think that will convince her to update. SF: You might have a point there. Oh well then. I won't threaten her. But she'd better update soon, because I'm looking forward to her being busted.
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