| "Of Gods and Monsters" Reviews/Comments [ 161 ] |
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: October 04, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad. I had to stop myself from crying. But I would like to know what happened to Sesshoumaru after seeing Teles' body and the baby. And Inuyasha really loved that baby and he had to hold him as he died. But at least, as if this makes it better, the baby died in his sleep and that's the most gentle way to go I suspose. It's sad but I would love to know more about what happened. Wonderfully written, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: October 04, 2004 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Niamh - you leave me breathless. What a beautiful (2 part) chapter...The characterizations of Sesshomaru, Teles and Inuyasha were perfect. The garden scenes were lovely. Miroku's take on Sleeping Beauty was perfect - I could just imagine him telling the story, surrounded by children (and sadly, it appears, without Sango) I was especially taken with Inuyasha'a sadness at the end - and his resolve - to change his past to give his nephew a chance. Just lovely.
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Reviewed By: nycscribe46 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;__; Oh, I felt so sad at the end, but the new chapters were wonderful. I feel Sesshomaru slowly trying to get Teles to do the right thing, to follow the path she's supposed to, even though he doesn't want to let her go. But Inuyasha's point of view really made this a memorable chapter. Thank you. Jay
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 04, 2004 15:03 CDT
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Whoa. That was a surprise. The banter between Inu and Fluffy was super cute.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you totally blew me away with this story, Niamh...the last scene, especially, had me sniffling. Though I am hopeful, given that Sesshoumaru in both timelines now knows how important a youkai father is, that perhaps the past can be changed. After all, events have already changed from what Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha remember from the first go-around... And I adored the banter between the two brothers...this exchange in particular had me chuckling: "...I still don't get why you get to be CEO." His voice was muffled, coming from the freezer. "Because I was always more willing to kill the competition." "Keh. You haven't killed anyone in decades." Sesshoumaru paused long enough to lean back and give his half brother a very pointed look. "An oversight. One I can correct."
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: October 02, 2004 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWHHHOOOOPPPPPIIIIIIEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm back to reading!!!!!!! It was wonderful as always!!! And Sango and Miroku are so cute but I think he's rubbing off on her ~wink~ I love your Inuyasha/Kagome scenes!!!! They're always perfect and I can picture them in my head every time!! This is not to say that I don't also love you're Sesshoumaru/Teles scenes because I really do. I think you came up with the best match for Sesshy that I've ever read in a fanfic! I love this story, please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: September 23, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was hoping you'd put this up here. I'm so glad you've updated. I've been reading this since it was started, and I managed to print most of the chapters before FF.net/Hypocrite.net decided to delete it. Deviant Nature had a character skit where the YYH gang found out they deleted this, and they began to plan all sorts of horrible retribution. I was quite amused. Her whole story is absolutly fascinating. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: September 23, 2004 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I love this chapter. I love the way that the 'afterglow' of Sango and Miroku is handled by Inuyasha. You have painted each of them in their own unique way. It's also nice to know that Sango and Miroku will have more 'well-watching' in their future... Of course, I still have an impending sense of doom about Miroku - please don't kill him off!
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Reviewed By: nycscribe46 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*applause* Well done, well done. Oh, this story is the best. It amuses the reader, intrigues the reader, and gives the reader the warm fuzzies all at the same time. Ah, I can't wait for the next chappie.
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Reviewed By: kirayasha the author On: August 13, 2004 10:02 CDT
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*laugsh* I loved it! Especially the ending! *lsughs* it was cute! Very cute! luv kira
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: August 10, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing!!!!! How did I know it would be the Karma Sutra? This is Miroku we're talking about. So Inuyasha is going have to stay in Kagome's time huh? ~winks~ I wonder what's going to happen? How many months is Teles now? I lost track. Anyway update when you can!!!
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: August 06, 2004 15:21 CDT
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Another great chapter "Shining One"- I like the twist at the end of the lemon w/Sango and Miroku-but it makes sense! I was a bit disappointed that it was not Teles and Sesshoumaru though-but it made up for my disappointment-well done for this splendid story-
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! Extra lemony goodness. Too bad, ff.net doesn't know what it's missing. But their loss. Anyways, wonderful chappy, can't wait to see how the whole sealing of the well is gonna be taken with those on the OTHER side of said well.
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Reviewed By: SonofZhon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 13:28 CDT
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An excellent story. It is a shame that fanfiction.net is run by hardcore ninja nuns who can't deal with the slightest hint of *gasp* sex. That is why I will not be able to post my sequel there and will most likely need to post it at Media MIner.
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Title: Of Gods and Monsters
Reviewed By: Deanna (Saekochan in disguise) On: August 05, 2004 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am I the first one to review this? I really wish this thing kept you signed in, so that I wouldnt have to put my sn in there broken up like it is. Anyway... OMG!! That is like, the best, and I do mean THE BEST, lemon I have ever read! Seriously, you'd think you were a professional romance writer. Also, I LOVE how you used the Kama Sutra in here. I always thought someone should use that as a part of a fic lemon... Eh, don't wanna waste any more space, so I'm going to go now... See ya! ^.^ :--Deanna
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